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Comments of chapter undefined of The Adeptus Custodes(DC)

Jose_matos
Jose_matosLv3Jose_matos

I don’t understand why would he lie about his origins? It seems needlessly complicated and dangerous if he contradicts himself by continuing to lie about it in the future. He doesn’t owe an explanation to anyone. Keep It Simple S*upid.

Atrox_ashborn
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plz dont drop this

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TheVersalStudios
TheVersalStudiosLv1TheVersalStudios

Good Chapter. I honestly believed that he had not chosen to be a primarch because of his pride, he himself said that he considered himself a winner. It is silly to believe that someone like that would want to have the face of another, however as a custodian he can keep his original body (in quotes) but improved to the maximum of his potential as a custodian.

Cpt_Dark
Cpt_DarkLv13Cpt_Dark

this seems interesting so I hope that you can continue updating it

TruthHurtsX1000
TruthHurtsX1000Lv2TruthHurtsX1000

Why does it seem the way he talks and personality changed already. His way of talking is dumb af tbh

Mysticwolf
MysticwolfLv5Mysticwolf

nice start 👌 bravo wolf hope he makes his own ship 😏

crimsoncobra97
crimsoncobra97Lv4crimsoncobra97

it has potential, I will watch as you cook

Damian0481
Damian0481Lv13Damian0481

i kinda hope he is going into a café and sits down and drinks coffee in front of people lol

Gerier
GerierLv4Gerier

Claudian_D_Amazon
Claudian_D_AmazonLv3Claudian_D_Amazon

The MC's personality bothers me a little but anyway, good luck with the story author

Gregory_Sullivan
Gregory_SullivanLv15Gregory_Sullivan

interesting and I'm glad this is here, there are so few warhammer fics on webnovel, I still stand by his first wish should've been to be the Emperor it would be a huge boost to his already startling power

Immortal_FOX_1
Immortal_FOX_1Lv1Immortal_FOX_1

I am incredibly confused can someone give me war hammer lore?

Cosmic_Wolf_4728
Cosmic_Wolf_4728Lv12Cosmic_Wolf_4728

I’ve been avoiding anything 40K because I just didn’t want to go through a massive lord grind yet but your intro hooked me in and makes me finally wanna take the leap into Warhammer that I’ve been putting off for to long. Hope this goes far and looking forward to your work!

GeeGeeTeeWuu
GeeGeeTeeWuuLv13GeeGeeTeeWuu

kinda lost me at the gear wish, couldn't really read much more after that thb, keep it up though as a lot of people enjoy your story

Bearagamo
BearagamoLv15Bearagamo

sooo he only said two wishes where is his last wish

JikoxChatGpt
JikoxChatGptLv4JikoxChatGpt

ok i don't get anything about Warhammer lore cause i dont play the game, but this is interesting, can anyone suggest me where can i start to know the lore of warhammer? game? book?

TachibanaShiro
TachibanaShiroLv5TachibanaShiro

Tank yu for the chapter.

SrAmato
SrAmatoLv1SrAmato

Era melhor ser um Primarca, pois existem muitas entidades conceituais que Primarca são mais do que capazes de matar permanentemente no universo Dc. Além do claro poder superior..... Mas tirando isso, ser um adeptus é legal.

Alreth
AlrethLv13Alreth

I love it when mcs feed canon characters so much misinformation😂😂😂

Some_Guy_3
Some_Guy_3Lv4Some_Guy_3

Thanks for the chapter