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Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal in Star Wars

OverkillBills
OverkillBillsLv5OverkillBills

Thx

Captain_Friendly
Captain_FriendlyLv4Captain_Friendly

I feel like the protagonist is above a normal name. It feels like he should be addressed by a title, like ancient one(Marvel) or the immortal. He could take names like Genji, but they would be temporary, while his title/name should be eternal. Written on the very fabric of reality by the force itself.

ZE0
ZE0Lv4ZE0

Idk if it’s just but I like to think when ever someone is born from the the force then genjis kids the celastiosapians would call them brother or sister I just thinks if would be hilarious if instead of during the clone wars when anakin,Ashoka and obi wan meet the celestials they meet genjis kids and just out of nowhere they all just start hugging anakin and call him brother🤣😂

Lucas_Coimbra
Lucas_CoimbraLv4Lucas_Coimbra

Genji sounds so...simple, the kind of name used as an alias, not his "real" name.

Epictram
EpictramLv13Epictram

Ok that's good and all, but... Force Waifu when?

EgorShpitko
EgorShpitkoLv10EgorShpitko

it is alive!

Lucas_Oliveira_2302
Lucas_Oliveira_2302Lv1Lucas_Oliveira_2302

How many midichlorians does a regular Celestial Sapien have? I imagine it's a lot and that everyone is force sensitive, and for comparison purposes, how many midichlorians does Anakin have? all we know is that it exceeds 20 thousand but not the exact number, I imagine it must be a number moderately higher than 20 thousand since he was the "chosen one"

killua32829
killua32829Lv4killua32829

I think it'd be cool to call him something like Dhruvin, apparently it means Great Person, Oldest One, They Are Firm.

gabriel_israel
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Kickedelm0
Kickedelm0Lv5Kickedelm0

hey author you forgot to troll the universe civilization like cave paitings , unknown languege with dirty jokes in it and some weird stractures

Raptor2244
Raptor2244Lv13Raptor2244

Thanks for the chapter. Glad you didn’t drop!

Kickedelm0
Kickedelm0Lv5Kickedelm0

MC should be slowly backing in shadows with his children and only become Legends and Myths , that universe takes his course for now. And he must learn to let go.

Matt_Gamble
Matt_GambleLv1Matt_Gamble

I think Archeon is a better name It gives of an ancient feel

matheus_alves
matheus_alvesLv2matheus_alves

Where are you

Orions
OrionsLv2Orions

Welcome back in the world of the inspired authors. I still search for mine but someday i will. Anyway, thx for the chapter and i see that you created the way to the division of the Je'daii order to happen (i think). I truly wonder what will happen during the story we know in SW like Kotor, SWOTOR the films etc...

Miguelpedragon
MiguelpedragonLv10Miguelpedragon

Más capitulos por favor 🙏🙏

BwamenStruik
BwamenStruikLv3BwamenStruik

You are updating this right?

AC_F5
AC_F5Lv4AC_F5

@author are you alright? you haven't updated for more than 2 weeks.. please don't drop this novel..

Lucifer_4life666
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DrunkenDogo
DrunkenDogoLv15DrunkenDogo

I would call him Traveler, or at least as a last name...Walker(as in planeswalker) is good as well, but it's a bit too close to skywalker

TheDudeThatReads
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