Comments of chapter undefined of Spider-Man- The Successful One

First Mistake MC killed the Spider,Now Oscorp will find out one of their Radiactive Spider bit Peter but in Original Peter didn't faint in Oscorp and everyone thought the Spider went Missing. Secondly MC was in a Hospital after getting the Spider Bite,Dude I'm Pretty sure there'll be a Blood Test If someone got Arachnid Bite Specially a Radioactive One,then how did they Not find out that MC is Superhuman Now? Even Worse,What If MC's Blood is used to Make Clones?

I don't understand this dichotomy with the MC's way of thinking, he starts by stating that Spiderman is his favorite hero, going to extremes such as attacking a writer for doing something that doesn't suit the superhero, then the MC has a displeasure with the moral compass of the superhero, he is your favorite hero because he has a great moral compass or he is not for the same reason. Next, I find it tiring that the character resorts to insults every few paragraphs to emphasize his thought, the author should find a better way to emphasize the importance of a dialogue/thought without throwing it in the readers' faces with insults. Finally, at least, in this first chapter it is difficult to believe in the statement of the synopsis regarding the work "The Spider", I hope that for his version the author is able to change weak points of the previous work, such as the idea unpleasant that in the Marvel universe women are willing to be part of a Harem, there is no place for that idea and making use of it only shows poorly developed work.

It would be nice if the MC could at least get 24 hours of time to himself without forcing MJ, Felicia, or other love interests down our throats.

Making it very hard to believ the statement you made in your synopsis

harem😁

I like the fact that the author is trying to put his own personality into it, even though he's using someone else for inspiration.