Comments of chapter undefined of I Am Reborn with Op Skills | TBATE

Listen author, with my experience with your writing so far, it's as if your story is very strange and disjointed, the protagonist seems like just a spectator, you've never shown him interacting or talking to another character in dialogue longer than 6 words. You might like to see this video here(use youtube subtitles).

Huh lol

I think you do something about a short talent make him grow like normal people so he can understand the way of hardship and then make his talent evolve, And for what reason I am saying this because he got everything given to him he didnt experience any hardship for acquiring it for that he has understand that himself

this is goood

pls write she as she not "he"