Comments of chapter undefined of Martial Grandmaster in Naruto World
Martial Grandmaster in Naruto World
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Alright. I won't continue past this and I announce my department for all those people who want to post a gif about not needing to do so. Have at it, guys. Anyway, Mr. Author, the story is good and well-written. Unfortunately, it is also good at putting me to sleep. There isn't much excitement in it and I feel that it would take 200 chapters for something to finally happen. The encounter with the Hokage was good. But short. The HentaiGodZ chapter was hilarious and it was the first time I had actual fun reading this story. And when I realized that little tidbit... it hit me like a truck my interest just plummeted to near zero. The story is not bad. Not at all. But it is not good either. Not exciting by any means. Not thrilling. I feel like it's just enough to keep my attention but not enough to actually make me properly entertained. I tried to go further and see if I find something interesting but I didn't. To be fair, this is more of a 'me' problem. I am sure there will be people liking the story. But for me, it is not.
