I recently read the newer version of this on ff.net and I must say... this version is much better. It is a pity this was dropped.

Alright. I won't continue past this and I announce my department for all those people who want to post a gif about not needing to do so. Have at it, guys. Anyway, Mr. Author, the story is good and well-written. Unfortunately, it is also good at putting me to sleep. There isn't much excitement in it and I feel that it would take 200 chapters for something to finally happen. The encounter with the Hokage was good. But short. The HentaiGodZ chapter was hilarious and it was the first time I had actual fun reading this story. And when I realized that little tidbit... it hit me like a truck my interest just plummeted to near zero. The story is not bad. Not at all. But it is not good either. Not exciting by any means. Not thrilling. I feel like it's just enough to keep my attention but not enough to actually make me properly entertained. I tried to go further and see if I find something interesting but I didn't. To be fair, this is more of a 'me' problem. I am sure there will be people liking the story. But for me, it is not.

Praise the Third Hokage! The strongest Hokage! ... Yeaaaah, about that. Respectable indeed.

What a cruel MF. Poor worms.

Oh, sweet summer children...

Nah. It's good. You had a good balance so far.

Hold up. Wait a minute. Something ain't right. You want to tell me a dude from Ancient China knows about the brain and how it works in correlation with control of the body? Hmmmm... sus! (Sorry. I know. I am nitpicking. But I just couldn't help myself, Mr. Author, since you were all about making him act like a proper person from Ancient China. Don't mind me :D)

Sigh. Here I was hoping for Mt Tai. I guess the MC is yet another one who has eyes but has never seen Mt. Tai.

Heh. Don't forget the gambling debts that come free with her, lol.

Since nobody is doing it...

It's Chinese, mate. You should expect people in Chinese fics to act stupidly. Sure, it happens in Western fics too. But it is a major trait of Chinese fics just like the Japanese make their MC with the harem gathering dense d*mba*s template in their novels. It is really hard to find Chinese fic with characters that can use their upper head properly.

I don't think you are. They literally met at the graveyard when Tsunade was mourning Nawaki. At least, that's what I remember from anime.

He is oddly excited that he hasn't seen his family for months. Family issues, author?

It's good. Very well written. My only gripe with it is the slow pace. It is slowly killing my interest, tbh. But other than that, nicely done.

Holy moly... that's plus ultra speed, lol.

Don't argue with the author's alt account. It's not as if he would tell you 'Yeah, I am in the wrong here'. Why would he? It's a waste of time, mate.

It was good. There were parts I did not like but that's true for every story. So, thanks for writing it, Mr. author.

Yeeaaaah, I have this feeling this will be dropped real soon. Every time a somewhat reasonable character goes down this route, becoming more and more degenerate as he gathers more and more women like pokemons while the author gives up on even trying to give them at least a shallow personality rather than this 'oh my master is soooo biiiiiiig' BS... I have never seen a story that wasn't dropped when it devolved into this stage. No offense author. Maybe I am wrong.

I don't like that he got the 'Harem King' quest. I believe that romance should come 'naturally' in stories. Even if a harem is involved. Giving him a quest just cheapens it because now there will always be a feeling in the background that MC is going for that or this girl because of his quest rather than that he is actually interested in her. I also don't like how he acted, asking to see Rias's panties. But oh, well. I guess to each their own. There will be others who like it, i guess.

Yeah. Disappointing.