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Comments of chapter undefined of Custom Made Archangel: The Rewrite

Colossus_Eye
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Nice

thenetheryboi
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I have come offering a potential evolutionary path for our little angel. [double hearted]: using the human base and the angelic nature of the user's soul a point of concentrated mana that mimics a true neutral mana heart is created in their soul. it has the potential to evolve into the mana heart it mimics. this removes or loosens the limitations placed upon angels with this an angel can behave like a demon/human. [second heart(warning: soul inbalance)]: this is the evolution of the[double hearted] racial skill. this racial trait removes all limits placed upon an angel's freedom and grants immense resistance against dark and mind magic. with this an angel can use dark magic like demons using the true neutral mana heart. grants the [soul imbalance] condition. [soul imbalance]: your soul is imbalanced. your body and soul will start to absorb the dark energies of the demons until a dark mana heart has been created in the user's soul. when balance is achieved users' pure heart will be moved to their soul. there is nothing that can stop this. [balanced]: your soul contains every single type of mana there is along with dark and light existing in harmony. just one more step needed until you can ascend and become something more than mere demons and angels. [lesser programer/lesser creator]: the creator that created everything was a [greater creator] you get the idea of how op you are right now right? PS: I expressed my love towards stories by giving the author ideas and I have never ever given an entire evolutionary tree to an author. I love this story. thanks for writing it.

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Sanders_Wanders
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In the future, Amon can create skills like: Braveheart: To be more brave and grow stronger by overcoming his fear and opposition. Due to his intense fear of getting hurt and dying again. Clear Mind: To improve his mindset and remove any unnecessary thoughts. Due to me, it's clear that Amon has been suffering from a mental ailment, or PTSD, since his first death. Duration Empowerment: To grow stronger from the passing moment or time, quite similar to "Slow and Steady Wins the Race." Due to his desires to grow more powerful, there is a possibility that Roy might exist, which later in the story will make him desperate to get more powerful.

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Sanders_Wanders
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Wait a minute. What if Amon could create a power called Debuff Reversal? Debuff Reversal is a powerful ability that would allow him to automatically reverse negative effects or debuffs into something more preferable or beneficial for him whenever he is affected by them. This skill would be particularly significant for Amon, as he has been affected by PTSD since his first death and has developed a deep fear of being injured or killed again. With Debuff Reversal, he would have an incredible advantage that could help him cope with or counter the absurd mental, physical, and supernatural threats that he's going to face since he's going to fight demons literally.

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Midnight_Gravity
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Is he in an outpost of Heaven or actually in Eden?, no Demon King will invade Eden since an original sin equivalent of an Angel exists there (Michael)

Omni404_Sans
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Demons_Ki
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Joker333
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Thanks for the chapter

Lord_Sleepless_
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Please chapter

Emperador_004
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Podria crear un fisico kriptoniano sin debilidades y cuando viaje a otros mundos crear como una religion le haria ganar puntos karmicos mas facil Y otra habilidad seria robar o copiar talentos y habilidades Imagen de mc humanoide si te gusta dime

MagicSand
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Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

Sanders_Wanders
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Can he make a skill make allows him to be more brave or like the Space Marines "They Shall Know No Fear"?

Atrox_ashborn
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thnx for the chapter

Grey1
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Tftc

Azathoth2
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Thank you for the chapter 🙂

IDLE_Chaos
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Thanks for the chapter 📖😁👍

cosima_li_ansaldo
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happy ramdan budy altho its 18th of the month

Bial1534
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Thanks for the chapter

DaoistTVJPRH
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Tftc

Leylin_Farlier99
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TFTC.