Vincent_0580
Like how you aren't afraid to make him OP, cause if he gets to strong for the marvel multiverse then he can just leave and explore others multiverses and realities, alot of authors are afraid to make their MC powerful because it defeats the purpore of the story but youve done it masterfully in my opinion. Keep up the awesome work!!
We need character interaction with people other than gaea alsoo why is auther only telling instead of showing for example we havent seen mc hold court or interact with a single asgardian besides his family also did his mom die i know his dad was dieing but i cant remember if it was stated he actually died if the authers reason for low character interaction and telling instead of showing is to rush to modern day so the story can truly start with all this being prologue i can understand it and accept it but if this is supposed to be the meat of the story i hope the auther fixes these problems the story has a lot of potential hope it becomes even better
Don't introduce op characters so soon...bcoz ur marvel story will end there....keep the plot story line true....show other parts of universe and other characters as well ....it's look like a dairy of a young Odin...I hope u expand introduce other characters and their roles in this story...make conversation real without doing information dump