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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers4h
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    Getting goody 2 shoes saving people thing will be cringe everyone will avoid...none likes to see him as vigilante.....c shoes his weakness by saving kara.. developed feelings for her...it's likely Batman and light will exploit it to full advantage...if mc has to become hero...then why not make him a dog of world govt and justice league from the Start....He is a ROB....ur plot and story misleading...u perhaps have no Idea how to continue this story...and think of stupid way by making mc developed feelings for teenage girls...you make him human of earth....a human from this earth after being born in dc will perhaps follow mc path...to develop teenager feelings angtsy drama.... pathetic.... here shows author is likely a teenager.... daydreaming teenager supes by making mc develope feelings

    Ch 86 Chapter 86 Master What's Wrong With You
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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers21h
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    Story is boring and pathetic...fucked up by TOaa...he is just a pathetic nobody got power somehow to become god ...and create his multiverse....so far shows he has no intelligence,no cunning,no wisdom...drop this poor fic ...it's look quite pathetic Chinese stories u translated it poorly

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    Omniscience in Marvel
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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers1d
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    Pevert and mentally disturbed can write this thrash...nothing in this story...mc just goes around fucks every female from all known comics...his character is of a young entitled young master.... Messed up story... avoid reading SAVE UR ENERGY.... AVOID READING THIS STORY....MC IS A MOTHERFUCKER WHO FUCKS HIS MOTHER AND SISTER ASSHOLE....

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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers3d
    Commented

    Story should progress...always Damien centric...what's happening with those gods, celestial,other alien world's etc...u need to expand the story and advance the story man...

    Ch 237 Chapter 234
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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers3d
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    Hope for hp World finishing soon.. Amelia can be a love interest of mc... Daphne time travelling is not mentioned and used for advantage...what was the need for time travel plot...it's look like author forget Daphne time travelled...

    Ch 207 CHAPTER {315-317}
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    Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]
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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers3d
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    So mc himself is writting the plot to continue this story ..author has no plot ... copying ideas from others....poor writting....making mc mentally immature to lengthen the plot to continue the thrash.... interaction between elder goddess is so casual...it's look like some school going teens gossiping among themselves.... projecting celestial as almighty..in truth either in mcu,comics.... celestial are vulnerable...and are butchered by knull easily.... celestials are mid tier powers....author is plain lazy ..no idea of mcu or comics.... author messed up...this is dxd. World..not marvel....there re demon lords,outer gods,etc ... celestials are nothing in front of them

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    Omniscience in Marvel
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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers3d
    Commented

    It's. Never mcu to begin with....it's a mess of every comics

    Ch 94 Chapter 93: Movement In The Shadows
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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers4d
    Commented

    Story is heading towards its doom

    Ch 62 Chapter 62: The Stark Expo Incident (2)
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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers6d
    Replied to TyrantTron335

    Nah.... Superboy is pathetic as usual

    Ch 81 Chapter 81 You Were Saying?
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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers7d
    Commented

    Try to finish hp part of the story without rushing it...but it's not going anywhere...need to enter marvel stories...there is not hp contents there....all topics in hp World is touched upon....

    Ch 206 CHAPTER {312-314}
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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers7d
    Commented

    A psychopath

    Ch 284 Chapter 279: World War III Part 9
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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers7d
    Replied to actinio_zirka

    It's quite pathetic.... even after so many are fighting they unable to beat a average villian in marvel....they are most pathetic beings in a backwater planet....they ll be killed in real Marvel world....and mc is quite weak....a thug lile character....naive and a weakling.... nothing much expectated

    Ch 91 Chapter 90: Guardians Debut III
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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers9d
    Commented

    Don't add Laura or Wanda or any more... accept Jen and hela and Cortana ... that ends

    Ch 235 Chapter 232
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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers9d
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    Mc should not be a goody shoes hero neither a villian...he should have known earlier without interfering Gotham will perish... he is naive to think situation rectifies itself after knowing 10k goblins already in city...it's like he is trying to show he is indifferent...but failed at the end....and after joker killings,now these goblins killings...are there humans still there in city??? Why aren't they leaving that city...bcoz very few will live after this massacre......and this breaches should be repaired by mc....bcoz if an op character come and destroys the earth with a snap of his finger...what mc gonna do??? Mc is not following logic... purely impulsive,, sometimes naive...not natural indifference aura is there....it's like he is trying hard to remain indifference...which shouldn't be true...bcoz mc should be indifference naturally to begin with

    Ch 79 Chapter 79 Batman's Back
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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers10d
    Commented

    Seriously????

    Ch 84 Chapter 83: F*ck Canon
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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers12d
    Commented

    Pathetic mc...low bar character with avg iq ....not a strong being in the ocean of strong beings....will be crushed soon... purely working on assumption...and still playing with humans wasting time....

    Ch 82 Chapter 81: Prelude To Wall-Crawler
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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers12d
    Commented

    Good chapter.... Superman eyes should have been gouged by monster first

    Ch 75 Chapter 75 Traumatic Experience
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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers12d
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    Quite pathetic display by mc ..hope mc won't bend and lick boots of captain America then...poor job...mc is a naive kid who got powers but mentality of a teenager.... immaturity and reckless....hope author get fucked and drop this thrash story....who like a mc who is naive,bending his ass to help others,etc...show off to low level characters,.....in fact these qualities will kill mc in any slightly dark universe.....of mc was in dc...joker would have loved to fuck him over.....

    Ch 81 Chapter 80: Trolling Fury
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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers13d
    Replied to Hellfire45

    If he wanted to join shield and become their lapdog...he could have arranged it beforehand....mc might think it's cool fooling shield...but in truth'he just become a lackey of shield...now he will be a slave for those Norse gods,Thanos,etc..... quite a little pathetic man..just like author being fucked in asshole before writing these chapters

    Ch 79 Chapter 78: Canon Begins
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  • Thinkers
    Thinkers14d
    Commented

    Well at this rate all main plot characters will disappear....

    Ch 73 Chapter 73 The Cameraman, The Reporter, And The Pilot
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