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Getting goody 2 shoes saving people thing will be cringe everyone will avoid...none likes to see him as vigilante.....c shoes his weakness by saving kara.. developed feelings for her...it's likely Batman and light will exploit it to full advantage...if mc has to become hero...then why not make him a dog of world govt and justice league from the Start....He is a ROB....ur plot and story misleading...u perhaps have no Idea how to continue this story...and think of stupid way by making mc developed feelings for teenage girls...you make him human of earth....a human from this earth after being born in dc will perhaps follow mc path...to develop teenager feelings angtsy drama.... pathetic.... here shows author is likely a teenager.... daydreaming teenager supes by making mc develope feelings
Pevert and mentally disturbed can write this thrash...nothing in this story...mc just goes around fucks every female from all known comics...his character is of a young entitled young master.... Messed up story... avoid reading SAVE UR ENERGY.... AVOID READING THIS STORY....MC IS A MOTHERFUCKER WHO FUCKS HIS MOTHER AND SISTER ASSHOLE....
So mc himself is writting the plot to continue this story ..author has no plot ... copying ideas from others....poor writting....making mc mentally immature to lengthen the plot to continue the thrash.... interaction between elder goddess is so casual...it's look like some school going teens gossiping among themselves.... projecting celestial as almighty..in truth either in mcu,comics.... celestial are vulnerable...and are butchered by knull easily.... celestials are mid tier powers....author is plain lazy ..no idea of mcu or comics.... author messed up...this is dxd. World..not marvel....there re demon lords,outer gods,etc ... celestials are nothing in front of them
It's quite pathetic.... even after so many are fighting they unable to beat a average villian in marvel....they are most pathetic beings in a backwater planet....they ll be killed in real Marvel world....and mc is quite weak....a thug lile character....naive and a weakling.... nothing much expectated
Mc should not be a goody shoes hero neither a villian...he should have known earlier without interfering Gotham will perish... he is naive to think situation rectifies itself after knowing 10k goblins already in city...it's like he is trying to show he is indifferent...but failed at the end....and after joker killings,now these goblins killings...are there humans still there in city??? Why aren't they leaving that city...bcoz very few will live after this massacre......and this breaches should be repaired by mc....bcoz if an op character come and destroys the earth with a snap of his finger...what mc gonna do??? Mc is not following logic... purely impulsive,, sometimes naive...not natural indifference aura is there....it's like he is trying hard to remain indifference...which shouldn't be true...bcoz mc should be indifference naturally to begin with
Quite pathetic display by mc ..hope mc won't bend and lick boots of captain America then...poor job...mc is a naive kid who got powers but mentality of a teenager.... immaturity and reckless....hope author get fucked and drop this thrash story....who like a mc who is naive,bending his ass to help others,etc...show off to low level characters,.....in fact these qualities will kill mc in any slightly dark universe.....of mc was in dc...joker would have loved to fuck him over.....
If he wanted to join shield and become their lapdog...he could have arranged it beforehand....mc might think it's cool fooling shield...but in truth'he just become a lackey of shield...now he will be a slave for those Norse gods,Thanos,etc..... quite a little pathetic man..just like author being fucked in asshole before writing these chapters