TalesByJaz
What was the point of adding the Knight Cultivation System? There is no real need to add multiple power systems as they either get confusing or get tossed to the wayside as we inevitably focus on the main power system that has far more power and potential. The HP magic system is versatile enough that you could have had Harry rely on rituals and potions to get everything the Knight Cultivation System offers. I just hope that you stick to just the HP Magic System and the Knight Cultivation System, as having more would likely end up being convoluted.
it's the first introduction to the system so I'll give it a chance but so far this sounds like a generic cultivation system, down to the breathing techniques, ranks names, etc. There was nothing in there that really felt like it had the HP feel or essence to it. at least make it something unique or more customized to the setting.