TalesByJaz
the last paragraph is like a chat gpt story
your foreshadowing sucks. we already know what's going to happen. there is no mystery in this story now. you screwed that up already.
You are telling me the elf he bonded with wouldn’t immediately go to him? Seriously
the last 21 chapters could have been put into a few chapters
the author should seriously just kill himself. trash writing
Thanks for chapter
This is last chapter I have read of this Fanfic.I am doing this because you forgot that you were writing Fanfic not creating your own novel. Believe me there are far more better novel out there, I can read instead of wasting my time here.
I thank you for the chapter.
Thanks for the chapter.
