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Comments of chapter undefined of Dc: start in Young Justice

Daoist223817
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Thanks

WalkingTall
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Awesome chapter!!! Can't wait for more!!! His own base could be on the moon!!! or deep underground. Also, If he world jumps he should go to My Hero Academia, they have some useful powers! Eraser, Creation, Overhaul, All for One, Copy, Search, Clones(Twice), Gear Shift, Fa Jin, Danger Sence, Rewind, Cell activation, New Rule, Black Hole, and Lie Detector.

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Isaac_Roldan
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Gift giving (can give robin some cool stuff that even batman will be jelly over, its fun to be the guy with the best gifts and other people are stuck watching lol) plus results, farewells and making a cool ship just cuz to roam the universe for a road trip. Passengers are optional and up to u, if u do. Bump into starfires planet I guess, no real destination since there is a lot. Then I guess some other dimensions in between for some spice (can imagine supermans face when he shows up like 'hey supes found ur cuzzo and we getting married' just to mess with him).

Juhiko
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Author, you forgot to give the formula thing to Connor so he can have all of the kryptonian powers.

OverlordBGs
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Nice chapter

Gurnoor_Singh_4533
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More đŸ”„đŸ”„đŸ”„đŸ˜ˆđŸ˜ˆđŸ˜ˆ

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Artoriastheabyssen
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I would honestly like to see him go to apokalips and talk to darkside. Not necessarily fight but maybe just check out his technology and chat. You could also go with a trigon route to fight him to up his powers, or the green lantern/red lantern core and maybe make his own ring/ power source. Dc is a large omniverse so there are a lot of possibilities.

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Luis_Luiz
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I really hate current comics, they are so ridiculous, this incessant search for the "ideals" of superheroes, they force the rest of the people to follow them, while they themselves never follow these so-called fake "ideals", they keep fraternizing Happily or dating murderous supervillains and criminals and then saying that, "deep down", they are good, the disgusting way in which Superheroes use the judicial system as a moral shield while considering themselves above the law they supposedly claim to defend ! It's all so ridiculous and absurd that I just can't suspend my disbelief anymore! Everything works for narrative purposes, it's all for fun, but I really can't do it anymore, I'm rooting against Dominic Toretto, John Wick, Harley Quinn, etc. They're all just bad guys, but anyone who goes against them is the "bad guy"!? And this also happens with the "heroes" of history, especially from DC and Marvel! Anyone who does not blindly follow HIS ideals and obey HIS every command without any hesitation is a dangerous person, a potential supervillain and has "too much power" to be left free!?!?!?!?!?!?! ?!?!? And the narrative of the comics really makes it seem like the "HEROES" are right??????? Are you going to address this in this fic? And will Zane really just forgive them without any punishment for trying to arrest him simply because they feel better with him in prison?

THE_LIVING_PARADOX
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TFTC👍

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Anthony_Nguyen_0554
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Ok chapter but it gets little tiresome for when most dc young justice fanfic Mc don't get miss martian part of the harem and almost always give a excuse that they don't want to take their bro superboys girl from him to me I find completely dumb if that's how they feel about it than just watch the cartoon show I want something different when it comes to romance from Canon stuff.

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Lucyan_King
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I've already seen a few fanfics with OC's beating the biggest bads of DC with army building on the side so I am all for something different like DC roided zombies or Incursions that reach a global scale. He can get a hobby of collecting stuff so he can build his own museum.

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Kaptagon
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give sterly some power like longevity&power augmentatiom

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VoidJester
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Thx for the chapter it was great and I liked the part where he was taking trophies

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Benoit_Valtin
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j'aurais aimer qu'il ridiculise plus hawkman et batman

Bonginkosi_Mnisi
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loving the chapters

FargoCake
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Loved it

Happy_days
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thanks for the chapter

Absolutedreamer
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Tftc

Bearagamo
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tbh ur the only author who actually stuck to ur mc power level wen fighting the JL tbh most do a random imma limit myself to train or to experience the fight which is stupid asf but i like the fact u didnt n got straight to it n ended it

Muertenoir
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The dream of men everywhere...Smack that for science