Okay... but what was he being accused of? Is this one of those comic book cases where the law is completely and "legally" disrespected by the Government itself?

He didn't even kill Amanda Waller that other idiot politician, I'm not asking why the other idiot superheroes distrust him just because of this ridiculous rule about don't kill this, don't kill that, if he kills him you'll be like him, what am I asking is why the President of the United States decided to declare Raiden a criminal ?

Until now I still don't understand why Raiden became a wanted criminal, besides breaking into the White House, all he did was expose the man to that other guy the s*** politician who invoked Rrigon. In the real world, breaking into the White House would make you a criminal, but the nonsense that Superheroes routinely do in the DC universe far outweighs that. I just don't understand how they declared him a fugitive, they just got angry and said "why not?" like in practically all American Comics or do they have some real accusation behind them?

Honestly, Clark and Lex's character development always seemed pretty ridiculous to me in Smallville! The series managed to make several character reformulations, giving the Green Acher a more serious and realistic personality, as well as several other heroes such as Black Canary, Cyborg , Martian Manhunter, but I was very forced to make Clark become the exaggeratedly all-loving hero cool as in the comics and Lex's development into a crazy, omnicidal supervillain seemed over the top and totally avoidable by anyone with common sense, while also "rescuing" genuinely evil people like Tess, the Kandorians, EVEN LIONEL , and various others over time! A particularly ridiculous fact about Smallville was that the reason Lex , when he was still a nice guy, became a person untrustworthy and untrust worthy in everyone's eyes was that he became ... A HEDONIST !?!?!?! Seriously , he started trying to overcome his personal tragedies by indulging in a partying and womanizing lifestyle and THAT made people treat him like dirt ! They had done a lot of bad things before , but did THAT make people lose trust in him ? Ridiculous !

This "thank" doesn't seem out of place, it's easy to forget that the main characters are still teenagers! Will this be addressed later on or will Clark be a womanizing scoundrel?

That didn't make any sense ! Pete would never stop going to save Chloe to go to a show ! You should really rewrite this chapter , that alone made this story decline in quality !!! Chloe and Lana leaving Clark behind also seems ridiculous , the show always had Clark conveniently face the villain of the week while he was alone in a secluded location , or Clark would run away and face him , but he would be left behind to face that villain Face-to-face with everyone agreeing doesn't fit either , without mentioning that they immediately came back as soon as the villain was defeated without alerting anyone ! One more thing: The "new" Clark is , supposedly , a person from the "real" world , why doesn't he think about looking for some more mundane solutions to certain problems ? He could have called the police on the way , why didn't he do that ? And why didn't he use super speed to go back all the way ? Clark's secret isn't more important than Chloe's life ! Honestly , this chapter seemed really poorly thought out! And last but not least : The Harem seems a bit forced , but then again , that seemed almost implicit about Clark's relationships with almost every prominent woman in Smallville , but are you really going to make this Clark stick with ALL the beautiful women on the show ? It's one thing to want more than one girl , this actually happens in real life , it's a very different thing to want ALL of them !

You should continue, this story is really very good , I really liked the fact that the protagonist is not one of those ridiculous weaklings who do the will of Marvel characters simply because he read their stories , I also liked the fact that this story shows how Marvel characters they seem to really want that whenever their will is done and THEIR ideals are followed to the point of forcing the rest of the world to follow them and then they play "Victims of Circumstances" , I also liked the fact that the MC does not refrain from using force lethal when provoked !

I think the dialogues and internal narrations are being exaggeratedly detailed between them , the conversations are being detailed as if they were blatantly explaining everything to the reader , but normal people don't talk like that . But other than that , this story is very well written ! One more thing : "Clak" is in the name of the story instead of Clark .

How about a classic "None of Your Business"? Seriously, why is the main character being so submissive and polite while they attack him, knock him out, steal his DNA, try to steal the Omnitrix and are completely suspicious and abrasive towards him? I know this can be stressful, but they seem to be taking it out on him and he is simply accepting it all as if he deserves it! I would understand if he just understood that they weren't going to instantly trust him as shown in several films, but now it seems like he's accepting being a doormat!

It deserves five stars just for being a really well-written Smallville Fanfic instead of the nonsense I see on this site . And to be honest , the Harem doesn't even seem out of place in Smallville , that was blatant in the first 6 seasons , for God's sake , they never decided on a love interest for him , one moment it was Lana , then Chloe , then Alissa , then Lois , and many others beforeb, during and after ! But let's first see how you ( Author ) will define these romantic/sexual relationships in this fic .

"Normal" Sunspot or overpower Sunspot ? In the comics , his powers evolved to give him titanic doses of raw physical power , and he could even fight hand-to-hand with the Gladiator ( Kallark ) .

This negotiation absolutely made no sense ! Was it a writing error ?

Have you never seen the ads for other fanfics? they serve to show how it is the progress of the story also allows the author to talk to readers and ask what they think of the story instead of those footnotes at the beginning and end of the chapter . If you inform what the update days will be, readers will see the chapter update and they will already know that it is an announcement so they will not be irritated (at least not too much).

People got used to the sporadic updates and now they kind of ignore this fic ! Make an announcement showing when this story will be updated, an announcement every now and then serves to attract readers a little ! Analyze these ads about where the story is now , how it went , what you think your writing mistakes might have been and where it is going , this also helps attract readers !

The fic started well, but I hope your Fanfic ( Author ) doesn't go that way . I mean , that was so contradictory : The old man just drugged him with an evil sadistic smile on his face , but then sincerely regrets what he "had" to do ? Does not make sense !

- ( Generic supervillain destroying the city ) : HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, THIS IS SO FUN ! I love killing people randomly without any reason behind my actions , simply because I'm sadistic ! [ Time Skip / Next Chapter ] - ( Generic supervillain who was destroying the city ) : You know , Mister Superhero who stopped me from killing millions of people sadistically , I was just doing it because I had to, they threatened my family , I didn't really want to do those things, you understand ? - ( Generic Superhero who stopped the Generic Supervillain from Destroying the Entire City and Killing Millions of People Sadistically ) : Yes sir , I understand ! I saw the Goodness Inside You ! You clearly didn't want to do this , even though you were clearly having a lot of fun destroying the entire city and trying to kill millions of innocent people ! Go away from here, live in a peaceful place and take good care of your family . As for today's events , don't worry , although you managed to kill thousands of people and cause billions in damage to other people's property before I managed to stop you , now it's all over , you can go live a free and happy life , don't worry either. worry about the authorities , since I have forgiven you for today's events , despite not having the authority to do so and having no personal involvement in the tragedies you caused , my forgiveness will mean , for some inexplicable reason, that no one will go after of you to arrest him ! - ( Generic Supervillain Who Was Stopped From Destroying the City ) : THANK YOU SO MUCH , Mr. Generic Superhero who Stopped Me from Destroying the City and Sadistically Killing Millions of People , I promise that I will TRY to improve my life and stop killing people sadistically , but I'm sure that any petty and ridiculous motive on my part will make me start committing these same atrocities again , perhaps even managing to kill more people next time ! - [ Does the Superhero Pose With His Arms Around His Waist ] ( Generic Superhero Who Stopped the Generic Supervillain from Destroying the City and Sadistically Killing Millions of People ) : Ah yes , I'm almost completely sure that's exactly what's going to happen happens , but WHEN it happens , I'll stop you in a tactically stupid climactic fight again and then MAYBE I'll arrest you , but most likely I'll FORGIVE YOU AGAIN , because that's what a True Hero Does !

The other reincarnated people seem to have tried (and failed miserably) to take away some of Alfie's "protagonism". He showed exactly why he was so special by cleaning the floor with them!!!!! If you are going to rewrite this story, please post the new chapters you already have, or do a recap of what the story would be like from now on until the end (if this ruins the new fic, at least explain why Bat-Loser attacked him)

Will the protagonist care about the sociopathy and bipolar disorder of the protagonists of Gossip Girl ?

PLEASE don't victimize Wanda and Pietro!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's disgusting !!!!!!!!! Everywhere, be it films, animated series or comics, no matter how horrible the things the two do, the narrative always tretas them as "deluded" HEROES . The excuses are: "They were suffering", "They're just children", "They deserve a 2°/3°/4°/°/.../100° chance to "start again" and after a while everyone JUST FORGET all his crimes! Literally never even mentioned again! That's ridiculous!

This really changes in the comics, sometimes it's your real family that has these powers, other times it's all the Tamarians, then it changes again, again, this Fanfic is exact !