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Honestly, now I just want Sean to tell a story about the Lands Between. Like Genera Radahn literally holding the stars in place with gravity magic, Morgott's loyalty to the golden order despite his reviled status as an omen, Mohg and his egg, Ancient Dragons and their time twisting scales, The battle of Caelid and the birth of a Goddess of Rot. The night of the Black Knives, Maliketh and Blaidd, Astel natural born of the void, The sacred relic sword and the Age of the Stars. Alot that can be covered, and way better atmosphere than Bloodborne. “However ruined this world has become, however mired in torment and despair, life endures. Births continue. There is beauty in that, is there not?” -Melina, the Kindling Maiden. Really hope we can see that covered someday since it was mentioned this chapter.
7 out of 10 on that chapter, would have been better without locking your mc's powers up or at least allowing him to use crazy out of context martial arts from pure memory like ranma to beat things like that first creature. I'm reading this for an admitedly cocky overpowered mc in a power fantasy setting it's like removing onepunchman's powers and expecting your audience to like that.