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dawnseeker2dCommentedCh 73 Meeting John again.- dawnseeker16dCommented
Thx for the chapter keep up the good work. I do have question though is the Harem only the two girls or do you plan to expand? Personally I prefer 1-3 love interest max in a story but if it more I don't mind sins the story is good for a lack of a better word.
Ch 54 Spending time with them(Part 2) - dawnseeker16dReplied to TrueTruth6t
The eyes, is a dead giveaway
(Pic in the comment) - dawnseeker17dCommented
Don't get me wrong I love the story and I hope you don't drop. but this chapter got confused I mean I feel like it's a poor copy paste of the movies. Like the OC said the scene where spider man has to chose between his live interest (MJ in the movie) or his duties (civilians in train kart) and that I totally get. It's a pivotal moment for the Hero Spiderman. Where things get confusing is why MJ And not Gwen? Cause I .Spiderman (movie ) the love interest is MJ (that's why the green goblin captured her) , in the amazing Spiderman it's Gwen. In the thankgiving chapter Peter kisses Gwen (so I presume he's dating her), we also see Norman realising who Spiderman is. Soo why MJ when he (Norman) knew Peter was Spiderman?
Ch 42 Arc 4 - Ch 8: Unexpected Date(s) - dawnseeker17dReplied to EmphieIsMe
Like background music.
While I went to the kitchen first to get some food for my little friend, I left Spotify on play out loud for Eddie, but I turned on my mind defense skill. - dawnseeker18dCommented
How does that work? Can she be selective with what she blocks ou or is it just the Spotify that is on a different "channel" (for a lack of better words)?
While I went to the kitchen first to get some food for my little friend, I left Spotify on play out loud for Eddie, but I turned on my mind defense skill. - dawnseeker21dCommented
If he/she cheated it means that you aren't hers/his soulmate
Will you forgive your soul mate if (he/she) cheats on you? But if you break up with (him/her ), you'll have to remain single for the rest of your life. ( Personally I wouldn't forgive) - dawnseeker23dCommentedCh 54 49: From the Past
- dawnseeker30dCommented
Or living in a fantasy world
I smiled and relaxed in the morning sun as I casually walked to my apartment, yes I got my own apartment, what did you expect? I lived with my father until I was eighteen? Nah only bitch made people do that! HAHA~ - dawnseeker1mthCommented
Ironique since for us to follow the story you need to describe it. But I get what you are saying. Like be afraid of the quiet guy in the room and not the loudest.
Also, I decided to show Peter's powers in this way because of something I had heard somewhere which just stuck with me that 'Power is shown, not described.' - dawnseeker3mthCommentedCh 41 Chapter 41
- dawnseeker4mthReplied to Doom2106
If you are talking about the underworld franchise Alexander corvinus( I think that was his name or Marcus father) is actually not a vampire, he is an immortal ( the only one that servived a plague and thankfully/unfortunately due to that same plague he become immortal if I remember correctly ). He had two children 2 boys (half Immortal and normal human), one was bitten by a bat (Marcus) and the other by a wolf (William) and so the first vampire and werewolf were born.
Apex Species was the ability she chose/made. It would make it so that any new species she gains, that species will start out at whatever is considered it's apex (NOT INCLUDING EVOLUTIONS OF SAID SPECIES). Meaning that her Blade vampire species was comparable to that of Dracula's from that universe, Marcus for the Underworld Vamp, the Vampire Queens of Charmed, and Newborns of Twilight. An overpowered ability when combined with the ones she already had. - dawnseeker5mthCommented
Nice subtle reference 👌
34: Imposter Amongus - dawnseeker7mthCommented
So funny that he says that to a 100 vampire but then again age doesn't determine your maturity
I looked at him with slight annoyance. "I don't hate you, but I don't like you, at least not yet; maybe after you mature a bit more, I will start to considering you a brother or friend." - dawnseeker7mthCommented
I like that this simple gesture has a deeper meaning
Everything went back to normal, and this little episode came to an end. They had burned Andrew's body with the walker bodies, and they had wrapped Big-Tiny's body, ready to bury him in the corner of the yard later. - dawnseeker10mthCommented
😂🤣🤣😂👌
"Well honourable Ser it's a pleasure to have you on our ship, now get the fuck out of the way before that dragon kills all of us!" He shouted before started barking orders at his crew. - dawnseeker10mthCommented
I think the girl that was half dead was teleported to Clark's world with the other kids
'Oh shit...when I erased all Undead, I guess she got caught in that. She did have control of her virus so it completely slipped my mind.', I thought confirming in my status window that I had indeed accidentally killed her, "Don't worry about it, I got rid of her." - dawnseeker10mthCommented
I prefer noodles 😂😋
"If this about what those people were saying, those claims were never substantiated.", Officer Udon stated.