Comments of chapter undefined of Gotham's Dead End Bar

I'm kind of sad that Sean is giving up on Blackfire, would've liked if he got both sisters. He better not give up on Starfire

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the fic is already ruined

This chapter was just eh feels like the quality dropped immensely here and the whole Tamaerean thing forced af nah gonna put this fic on hold for a bit see if things get back to normal or keep dropping off

If Sean doesn't get Star and Raven by the end of this we will start a revolt. Blackfire while very hot doesn't really have any uniqueness to stand out and stay in the harem. Starfire is the better Tamaranean and Raven and Didi own the Dark Vibe better than her. Harley's got the craziness and Ivy is the calm that balances her. Barbara is the serious one and Kara is the innocent one.

From Vandal Savage to Criminally Smooth.

I really liked this book when I started reading it back when there was around 10 chapters I like the relationship between DeeDee and MC (I don’t remember the correct spelling of his name) the villain and hero’s reactions to the stories was great and I understand the feeling and lack of morality the protagonist has but the more characters like Super Girl, Raven, Wonder Woman and Bat Woman become involved with the protagonist the less I enjoyed the story the only one out of all of them I believe actually like him is Super Girl. Geez even poison ivy doesn’t actually like him and is more attracted to the power given by DeeDee I will be honest I like these characters you have written them very well but Raven Made me super uncomfortable when she first met MC and DeeDee and that has not changed I am sorry if I offended you I just wanted you to know how much your story means to me and how much fun I had with your character

What was even this chapter?

thanks for the chapter kinda, sad we didn't get blackfire with Sean

While it’s a shame that Blackfire isn’t part of the harem, it was inevitable since she’s from another planet. I do hope that Starfire is part of it since her residence is on Earth, so there’s no excuse to get together with Sean.

this chapter feels really forced like it belongs in a mind control hentai

Thanks for the chapter

Nice

Thank you for the chappy!!

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Nice

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thanks for the chapters

thanks