Of the MC (Sorry)

I’m really enjoying this tribe story and limiting his powers was a great idea and I hope his collection habits continue as it is my favorite part the MC

I have tried to read a lot of FATE X Marvel fic must of them are never finished or are really bad this is the best one I have read keep up the good work looking forward to reading your story

Maybe make the ninja profit a student of the great toad, sage or have him be a toad summoning beast who said all of them had to be human.

I like the idea of the ninja profit even the running away to another world because of the memories of the future I think him going blind or removing his own eyes and becoming a saige or monk and becoming strong through the soul because that is something that the ninja word the DBZ world and The Wizard world all have in common just my thoughts

I really liked this book when I started reading it back when there was around 10 chapters I like the relationship between DeeDee and MC (I don’t remember the correct spelling of his name) the villain and hero’s reactions to the stories was great and I understand the feeling and lack of morality the protagonist has but the more characters like Super Girl, Raven, Wonder Woman and Bat Woman become involved with the protagonist the less I enjoyed the story the only one out of all of them I believe actually like him is Super Girl. Geez even poison ivy doesn’t actually like him and is more attracted to the power given by DeeDee I will be honest I like these characters you have written them very well but Raven Made me super uncomfortable when she first met MC and DeeDee and that has not changed I am sorry if I offended you I just wanted you to know how much your story means to me and how much fun I had with your character

Spider man 2099 “911 is a canon event you can’t change it”

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Yay I can’t wait for more of this story it’s so unique and I love the reaction to the truth

Anyone else rooting for Garaga I really want him to rise in power but I realize that when he becomes stronge he will become to big for his britches

I love to hear Kushina’s POV when she regains conscious Kushina: “what’s going on where am I?” Shun: hey funny story. I kinda sealed you like the tailed Beasts but don’t freak out you have some nice new powers”

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I really like the idea of older male Ruby. You could change his semblance to make him more his own character and give him like a giant ax or something different maybe His weapons don’t work with dust because When the world ends there is no way to make it

I really like this magic system and the reason why the protagonist is op so good. I can’t wait to see the other game the MC adapts for the new world he is in. :)

[img=update] I personally love this story. The system isn’t to complicated to understand and with no stats the protagonist growth is entirely based on perspective. I hope to see more especially with the Naruto world appearing. I’m interested to see how civilians in that world will get the ability to play the games since mainly only ninja villages have computers.