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Comments of chapter undefined of Playing With Magic

BigSteve
BigSteveLv3BigSteve

In what starwars did the jedi seek balance?

White_Wolf_7506
White_Wolf_7506Lv14White_Wolf_7506

I don’t know why but I get the feeling ChatGPT was used a lot to write this. I mean, I have tried using it myself before to write stories but it always tries to add childish wonder in paragraphs which I am seeing here too. Not saying it’s bad or anything.

Dame_ningen1
Dame_ningen1Lv14Dame_ningen1

What the he’ll is this writing?

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WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.

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ggswart_510
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Thanks for the chapter

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gundamNora
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suggestion don't add things from fates universe since it usually gets fanfic to dig their own graves quickly with how complicated the fates universe magic/abilities gets and the amount of knowledge/research that both readers and author need to do.

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INDRA32
INDRA32Lv5INDRA32

Thanks for the chapther

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Saleh_AL_ameri
Saleh_AL_ameriLv4Saleh_AL_ameri

Great chapter wish there was more chapters today

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Abeorohm
AbeorohmLv11Abeorohm

It is a really good fanfic keep on writing more please