Comments of chapter undefined of Kumo desu ga, Nani ka? - Edit System

I know author said she can’t change D attitude at this point but it just ruins the whole vibe of the novel. She’s so overbearing here it’s just take you out of the immersion of what you would expect for this novel and D

A reader warned me that D wasn't acting the way she should, but I had already written this chapter some time ago, and it was impossible to change it (because of patr eon). However, I warn you that she won't act like that anymore, and I'll try to follow the character as she should. I made her act this way to show the protagonist that D was watching, but I ended up overdoing it. It would have been better if she had just talked to him peacefully, I know that. I hope you didn't get angry. Oh, and Kumoko and the protagonist will be getting back together soon.

I found the way you used to separate MC from Kumoko very forced

thank you for the awesome chapters and I hope you have a wonderful week

It was very good, but this interference ruined everything for me... there is also the fact that it will take him a while to find Kumoko, we had high expectations for their meeting, and when that happened they didn't even spend 5 minutes together... I think I'm going to abandon it... but still, congratulations on the work, the idea is good and everything, but I don't like these separations.

good ff, i like this a lot as i like the og, thanks for the chapter

thank you for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter D must be upset that someone is interfering with her game, right?

It was cool. Although she was the way she was in LN, this time, she didn't know anything about the MC so it is not far fetched for her to react liket hat. Instead of being entertained, he could be a threat to her entertainment.

thanks for the chap, im just sad that it might be a while before mc interacts with kumoko again🥲

Thx for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter!

thanks for the explanation author-san even though you dont owe it to anyone. much appreciated

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thanks for the chp

Thanks for the Chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Hum...

Maybe you could try to rewrite this chapter without disturbing the continuation. because I feel uncomfortable when you describe D's character in the wrong way, D is an evil god who is so bored that in search of fun he creates a system to save the planet for fun. Even if there are existences that he doesn't understand or new variables, he won't destroy them instead he will regard them as entertainment and a new challenge for those who can reach him, that's why he provides the heresy skill. Please improve it so that readers will continue to continue your story. Also try to create your own world, don't stick to the existing plot, besides that, don't make the MC directly OP, please explain the process of getting it more clearly. Lastly, pay attention to the balance of power, don't make it too OP so that the story is monotonous and has no ups and downs