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Maybe you could try to rewrite this chapter without disturbing the continuation. because I feel uncomfortable when you describe D's character in the wrong way, D is an evil god who is so bored that in search of fun he creates a system to save the planet for fun. Even if there are existences that he doesn't understand or new variables, he won't destroy them instead he will regard them as entertainment and a new challenge for those who can reach him, that's why he provides the heresy skill. Please improve it so that readers will continue to continue your story. Also try to create your own world, don't stick to the existing plot, besides that, don't make the MC directly OP, please explain the process of getting it more clearly. Lastly, pay attention to the balance of power, don't make it too OP so that the story is monotonous and has no ups and downs
he also uses the power system to engulf his other souls in another world by solving karma. maybe this novel you can be a reference too... Sorry if my word is wrong because english is not my language mother
Just keep up your novel, i will still watch your creator, dont down
did you get a reference from the way of the devil world, for the union of souls. just asking
Why so long, to update