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Yuzumi01

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I like story some like fanfiction

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  • Yuzumi01
    Yuzumi012mth
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    Maybe you could try to rewrite this chapter without disturbing the continuation. because I feel uncomfortable when you describe D's character in the wrong way, D is an evil god who is so bored that in search of fun he creates a system to save the planet for fun. Even if there are existences that he doesn't understand or new variables, he won't destroy them instead he will regard them as entertainment and a new challenge for those who can reach him, that's why he provides the heresy skill. Please improve it so that readers will continue to continue your story. Also try to create your own world, don't stick to the existing plot, besides that, don't make the MC directly OP, please explain the process of getting it more clearly. Lastly, pay attention to the balance of power, don't make it too OP so that the story is monotonous and has no ups and downs

    Ch 21 Chapter 20 - D.
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  • Yuzumi01
    Yuzumi012mth
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    in the Kumo Desuka series. Every time an Appricial skill is used on an opponent, the opponent will feel uncomfortable and disturbed, and will be aware that they are being watched.

    Ch 21 Chapter 20 - D.
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  • Yuzumi01
    Yuzumi012mth
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    Your forget about spesial skill kumoko (idate jump= +500 speed

    Ch 20 Chapter 19 - Our meeting is ruined.
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  • Yuzumi01
    Yuzumi012mth
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    in the Kumo Desuka series. Every time an Appricial skill is used on an opponent, the opponent will feel uncomfortable and disturbed, and will be aware that they are being watched.

    Ch 19 Chapter 18 - We finally meet.
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  • Yuzumi01
    Yuzumi015mth
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    does anyone know where I can read chapter 97+

    Ch 98 Chapter 76 + 77 + Announcement
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  • Yuzumi01
    Yuzumi016mth
    Commented

    Good

    Ch 81 Chapter 70.2
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  • Yuzumi01
    Yuzumi016mth
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    Thank

    Ch 78 Chapter 69.2
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  • Yuzumi01
    Yuzumi016mth
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    Good

    Ch 75 Chapter 68.2
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  • Yuzumi01
    Yuzumi016mth
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    Thank

    Ch 74 Chapter 68.1: Points Crisis / Dropout Crisis / Fraud?
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  • Yuzumi01
    Yuzumi016mth
    Commented

    Nice

    Ch 73 Chapter 67.3
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  • Yuzumi01
    Yuzumi016mth
    Replied to chandanchd7

    I'm sorry, i don't know about that, please say thank for the author

    Ch 72 Chapter 67.2
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  • Yuzumi01
    Yuzumi016mth
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    write your story, don't rush to follow the main storyline, and continue to build the character of the main character. I am optimistic and like your story[img=recommend][img=recommend]

    Ch 72 Chapter 67.2
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  • Yuzumi01
    Yuzumi016mth
    Commented

    Cerita anda sangat seru, bisakah menga update lebih cepat

    Ch 72 Chapter 67.2
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  • Yuzumi01
    Yuzumi013yr
    Replied to Otaku_king

    he also uses the power system to engulf his other souls in another world by solving karma. maybe this novel you can be a reference too... Sorry if my word is wrong because english is not my language mother

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  • Yuzumi01
    Yuzumi013yr
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    Just keep up your novel, i will still watch your creator, dont down

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  • Yuzumi01
    Yuzumi013yr
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    did you get a reference from the way of the devil world, for the union of souls. just asking

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  • Yuzumi01
    Yuzumi013yr
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    Why so long, to update

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