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novelmeister
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Kind of dislike the themes in this novel so far. Switched to fantasy noble kingdoms to Chinese sects to jungle environments, there aren’t any clear cut goals or objectives of the mc either other than to acquire power and eventually kill his “ archenemies” lol

WriterTheos
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Thanks for the offer haha. But, I can’t stray from this story in such a manner. However I appreciate the insights. I will tell you that there is a “spark” so to speak coming soon. I won’t reveal what it is but just know that it is quite the big plot change.

novelmeister:Sure, I’ll bite. Although I didn’t particularly like the pacing on this(as per my review) what I particularly enjoy is Sol exerting his “Omega Presence/Demon of the South” presence on everyone. With that said, since this novel has been dragging on so far you need a scene that would blow readers minds. Right now it’s just sol jumping from sect to sect getting slightly more powerful each time. While that’s not bad for character development, it’s boring. Whatever you have planned with this arc and the zuzhou sect, keep it, but after he leaves the sect (at some point, whenever you’re ready for the mc to leave this realm and go to the inner realm) what you should do is have him secretly enter the emperors palace and commit a high stakes robbery, because the mc heard from the zuzhou sect master the emperor holds a hidden cultivation technique that exceeds all other techniques in raw power as it came to existence from a god or higher being, but the issue is no one knows why it came to this realm and no one alive can master the cultivation technique, since it’s meant for gods. Since the mc had cursed energy, naturally, he can curse the book and absorb it. Once he absorbs it the alarms in the palace go off, and the mc sets off on the largest killing spree in that realm ever, killing the emperor, all of the vassals in the palace, every servant, guard, civilian - everyone, before progressing to a higher realm. Unfortunately, as the novel had already foreshadowed higher beings coming to the realm from the emperors inner thoughts around the tournament arc, they coincidentally arrive at the same time the mc killed everyone in the palace. From there, you can decide how to write the next arc. If you can fulfill my request I’ll donate a 5000 coin gift. I currently have 12k coins so this isn’t a farce either. Of course if you don’t want to write this arc I won’t mind either, it’s not my story. I simply think this kind of behavior from the mc is natural and it would elevate his title to something more sinister than his old one.