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Thanks for the offer haha. But, I can’t stray from this story in such a manner. However I appreciate the insights. I will tell you that there is a “spark” so to speak coming soon. I won’t reveal what it is but just know that it is quite the big plot change.
From about 230-250 they will be fixed.
Told you 😁
LOL nah I just had some complications irl. Story is back on full throttle. I’ll soon post extra chap as well for the missed days.
About Sols past. Although there may have been bad insights on my part, there is a reason for his shadowed backstory. All I will say is there will come a point where it will all make sense, where the MC will need to face his back story head on. That makes it sound like he’s trying to escape it. Is he? I can’t tell you. As for Sols power gap. There is a good bit to unpack. Right now, pretty much the only thing making Sol stronger is 4 things. 1. Cursed energy making everything that he has stronger. Such as his spells and weapons. 2. His killing intent which has a weakening effect due to fear on his enemies. 3. His Raw Cursed Energy which he can unleash at will and use in his ether or physical attacks. He used this for the entrance exam. It excels his power greatly. 4. His fighting ability learned from his past life. He excels better than all in it. To defeat the king, he used 3 and 4 strictly, and 1 and 2 didn’t help. Creating pills doesn’t work the same in another realm. The ingredients may be different and so forth. However, another reason is simply because there isn’t jack shit in Seeranthel. Why is he not way stronger than his peers? Mostly it’s a pacing issue. This also ties into why the tournament felt like a filler arc. I wanted to end the seeranthel arc fast so that sol could finally boost in power in all aspects that don’t seem good to you and I imagine all other readers. As explained in the first few chapters, sol can not transfer spells or cultivation techniques through memory alone. Only those stores in his soul. The randim wnemy is Ionel from the Zephr Serpent. At the end if that mini arc Ionel wanted revenge. He reamins a mysterious character because he has a lot of toles tonolaybin the future. Over all, a lot of the problems in thus jovel are due to this fact that Sol was still in the sanctuary. Both on my part and the world, it was hard for hus character, husbpower, and his development + the story’s development to fourish. However, i encourage you to keep reading after he leaves the walls. I can not promise you whag you wnat, bht u can promise you that a lot of things will change and the storybwill progress kuch further, better, and more crazy. Thanks for the insights, they are the best type of help for an author.
He usually makes a lot of non crucial decisions that don’t make it to the Emperors desk. In this case, he has no power.
Stay low?
Well… he is Head of Magistrate. That means he controls the board of the Emperors Handmen.
yea i mixed em up for a while haha. its huun.
Extra chap to make up for it. 😘😇