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novelmeister

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Hello, and welcome to my profile! I'm a certified writer and bookworm 🙂

2024-03-14 JoinedUnited States
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  • novelmeister
    novelmeister18h
    Commented

    Quest progress: 45%/100%

    Ch 236 The Impending Crisis
    altalt
    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • novelmeister
    novelmeister1d
    Commented

    I was able to access the newest two chapters by using the chapter list but scrolling down didn’t work. You were right, it seems like it’s a problem with webnovel. Anyways now that it’s fixed everything is okay, also you should mention that if a privilege chapter isn’t showing, then they need to look at the chapter list on the newest privilege chapter to read it when users buy privilege.

    Ch 222 Maya's Concern
    altalt
    SUPREME ARCH-MAGUS
    Fantasy · PeterPan
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  • novelmeister
    novelmeister2d
    Commented

    Chap 221 and 222 aren’t available

    Ch 220 Thank you @Arktear for the Dragon [Bonus]
    altalt
    SUPREME ARCH-MAGUS
    Fantasy · PeterPan
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  • novelmeister
    novelmeister2d
    Replied to PeterPan

    Looks good, except the very last chapter available isn’t available on privilege.

    Ch 217 Phoenix Yin-Yang
    altalt
    SUPREME ARCH-MAGUS
    Fantasy · PeterPan
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  • novelmeister
    novelmeister2d
    Posted

    An overused concept combined with an otherworldy destiny makes for a great story. Unfortunately, this isn’t unique, and leads me to give you an imperfect rating. Keep writing! 🙂

    altalt
    The War of the Primals
    War · Alb22
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  • novelmeister
    novelmeister2d
    Commented

    Fix the privilege chapters - there’s 3 that cannot be read yet

    Ch 217 Phoenix Yin-Yang
    altalt
    SUPREME ARCH-MAGUS
    Fantasy · PeterPan
    detail
  • novelmeister
    novelmeister7d
    Replied to PeterPan

    Hmm ok

    Ch 209 Unheard Sound, Thunderous Valor
    altalt
    SUPREME ARCH-MAGUS
    Fantasy · PeterPan
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  • novelmeister
    novelmeister7d
    Replied to novelmeister

    This would break some of the immersion of course but other authors especially of very popular books have done this and it hasn’t been detrimental to the novel in any way, btw

    Ch 209 Unheard Sound, Thunderous Valor
    altalt
    SUPREME ARCH-MAGUS
    Fantasy · PeterPan
    detail
  • novelmeister
    novelmeister7d
    Commented

    Hmm where is the dancing? Although they disrespected the corpses dancing would have brought it to another level. “One of the birds was singing the tune of the Macarena dance, a dance sequence from a lower realm, while roasting a phoenix for dinner”

    Ch 209 Unheard Sound, Thunderous Valor
    altalt
    SUPREME ARCH-MAGUS
    Fantasy · PeterPan
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  • novelmeister
    novelmeister8d
    Replied to novelmeister

    Please scroll down to the bottom of the replies to the first reply to read them in order, thanks.

    Ch 220 The Golden Topper
    altalt
    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • novelmeister
    novelmeister8d
    Replied to novelmeister

    The reward for successfully completing this quest will be 1x Golden Gachapon. Remember to respond to this with your decision. If you don’t believe I have the funds, I can send a picture here with proof of my coin balance to back up the validity of this quest. Happy writing!

    Ch 220 The Golden Topper
    altalt
    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
    detail
  • novelmeister
    novelmeister8d
    Replied to novelmeister

    It is your choice from this point how you want the MC to go. You could have him hire a bunch of actors to act as game developers and teach them programming info from his system and act like they were the initial inventors and not the games corp, or you could have the MC outright mention that everything was of his own volition and design, making his character more prolific in the public eye due to his skill set. The sky is the limit for you, author, when it comes to this quest.

    Ch 220 The Golden Topper
    altalt
    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
    detail
  • novelmeister
    novelmeister8d
    Replied to novelmeister

    1, how he came up with the pods design, and 2, who developed it. By including this type of content in the upcoming chapters, you will successfully set this book of for success due to finally revealing controversy surrounding Reyes’ introduction of miraculous inventions one after another.

    Ch 220 The Golden Topper
    altalt
    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
    detail
  • novelmeister
    novelmeister8d
    Replied to novelmeister

    The games company is accusing Reyes of stealing the initial concept and building upon it using his own technology. Due to this outrage and public scrutiny on Reyes for supposedly stealing the concept of the pod, his board and the US congress pressures him for answers

    Ch 220 The Golden Topper
    altalt
    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
    detail
  • novelmeister
    novelmeister8d
    Replied to novelmeister

    They will show early development schematics of their pod which is very similar to the one given by the system, because the system took the pods invention from this game company, just it was taken 30 years in the future when the pod was finished.

    Ch 220 The Golden Topper
    altalt
    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
    detail
  • novelmeister
    novelmeister8d
    Replied to novelmeister

    In the upcoming chapters to do with the Virtual Reality Pod, after MC releases it to the public there should be a massive riot by a games company based in the USA accusing Reyes of committing fraud by stealing their idea for the pod.

    Ch 220 The Golden Topper
    altalt
    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
    detail
  • novelmeister
    novelmeister8d
    Replied to novelmeister

    Author, I am a bit eccentric so I will be giving you a quest. It’s up to you to accept it or not, but here it is anyways.

    Ch 220 The Golden Topper
    altalt
    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
    detail
  • novelmeister
    novelmeister8d
    Commented

    Hello author! Because the comment section doesn’t allow long paragraphs, I am splitting this message up into multiple comments through replies. Please read them all, thanks.

    Ch 220 The Golden Topper
    altalt
    Building a Business Empire with my Technological System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • novelmeister
    novelmeister8d
    Replied to novelmeister

    Make it hilarious too

    Ch 208 Leaving for war
    altalt
    SUPREME ARCH-MAGUS
    Fantasy · PeterPan
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  • novelmeister
    novelmeister8d
    Commented

    In exchange for leaving this gift I want you to make a scene in the upcoming war where the enemies (birds) wipe out a large portion of the phoenix troops and dance on their corpses mocking mc☺️

    Ch 208 Leaving for war
    altalt
    SUPREME ARCH-MAGUS
    Fantasy · PeterPan
    detail