Comments of chapter undefined of Divine General Mahoraga in Shadow Slave

Take it however you want but to me your writing quality in 3rd person pov seems significantly better

This gunna be a harem? Can already see the mc getting with the blind one (forgot her name lol) and now it seems nephis likes him as well lol. Don’t mind either way. Great novel can’t wait for next chapter.

You just raised my heartfelt harem flag, and I hope it's done

hmm I don't read Shadow Slave, but is Sunny's distrust is his characteristics? and are there gonna personal growth in his Character Building?

I like this point of view.....it brings the characters to life very well....but writer, I hope in the future you make lots of conversations, not MC monologues explaining conversations.

Thank you for the chapter

I need more chapters please

thanks for the chapter..great work there..., now i want the perspective of the 'fate' ckckck lol nevermind.

thanks for the chapter

NAAA GANG Nephis is in LOVE😭I loved the way u described her and sunny ngl

TFTC👍

Thanks for the chapter.

Thx for the chapter

Will this be harem?

I liked it keep up with the great work

Obrigado pelo capítulo!

thanks for the chapter

Nice update!

Thanks for the chapter

Started reading shadow slave a while ago all I gotta say is it’s interesting🤷🏽‍♂️