the story is flat, I read it in faloo up to 21 chapters... for those of you who have read a lot of danmachi fanfiction like me, maybe you will feel the same... especially this MC is very, very lucky, he got 26 million Vali in His first dungeon dive, and it seems to follow the pattern of other stories where people around him are amazed by the MC. The increase in MC's strength is also very fast, on his first dive he increased his status points by 400 points for each attribute, not to mention that with the 26 million Valis that MC has, MC can use that money to withdraw the gacha system which costs 10,000 Valis per withdrawal. you can imagine the increase in MC in the future will be very fast..... for the translation. Good... but this story may not be for me

In the past, when the broadcast of Boruto had just started, I was very annoyed by the fact that Boruto's behavior towards Naruto was very annoying, so that it crossed my mind "if someone told him about his father's story"... Gradually, I stopped watching the anime, interest in anime and its stories disappeared. many years later or it could also be called today, May 18 2024, I am here, interested in reading Boruto fanfiction because of this book... I am very interested in the reactions of people from the Boruto era to the Naruto story, even though today the MC of this book has not yet drawn manga Naruto, but looking at the system panel which provides the Naruto storyline script is a show of the author... the implementation of the character is good, so you don't mistake it for someone else... I hope you don't stop and disappear the author

MC should at least draw a romance manga, seeing as the previous chapter mentioned Icha Icha as a romance novel, really...

why China calls the earth a blue star

Not enough or too few paragraphs, it makes me dizzy and uncomfortable when reading sentences with long paragraphs

Apakah penulis akan memasuki honkai Star tail dalam cerita??

Selamat kembali!!!

I have read 30 chapters and I think you can just watch the anime. overall the story is almost no different, like you copy and paste with a few small edits without any impact, maybe there is a slight impact but not to the point of disrupting the Canon event.

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She heard that, didn't she?

if the character is oc, don't forget to give us the writer a picture of the girl. I feel like she will be connected to mc

Hopefully Kenshin can see again when he does "that first time"...otherwise how can he explain it accurately to us.

I don't think Kenshin is blind, he just hasn't adapted yet, like playing in the sun and then coming to a darker place, we can't see clearly. So Kenshin's case might be the same, he's too used to seeing souls (4D+ creatures) so he forgets to viewing the material world (3D)

It seems that Anos' luck with women is also carried by the template

Poor Milicas, he has been manipulated by the author without realizing it.....(*Basically, he's just an NPC to introduce make-up and graphics to the MC*)

1% ??....that's more than enough to destroy a mountain, don't underestimate the power of someone who has reached the multiverse...or am I doing it?, is 1% of the power enough to destroy a planet?

thank you for the chapter....I don't know who the author chose as the MC's partner, but if it's kathyln, I hope the MC is not used by the king....and if the author doesn't give the MC a partner....that's against MC reincarnation goal. experiencing what has not been experienced, such as parental love

I want to say that her mother is Aurora, because cid is raising flags by saying "it's impossible for a spirit to get pregnant" after having unprotected s*x

usually I don't like fanfiction that is not related to reincarnation or transmigration, because the original protagonist has to go through a long development, a naive way of thinking that leads to similar mistakes in various stories.... but wow, I was surprised because I really liked this story, 10/ 10 if measured...at the beginning of the first chapter, I thought this would be an annoying story because the MC's nature was so wild, it turns out I was wrong, after finishing the first 5 chapters, I realized this was a hidden gem, a comedy story that was quite jaw-dropping I'm sick from laughing and smiling.... I hope the author doesn't stop making this story, because I really enjoyed it

Your book, Mushoku Tensei, was deleted?