Promezus
Why would a family with such influence need to go through such a roundabout and sloppy way to get this type of eye? Are they intentionally trying to get exposed?
HaracasAye:I understand just saying this could have been done better. No need to make things so complicated and conspirational. Just off the top of my head, the mc and the girl cud have been in the orphanage, he cud have got the eyes and told her as a secret. She tells the orphanage keeper for money or something. Its simple and much more believable.