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Promezus

Promezus

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A writer who shall bring life to his imagination

2023-07-29 JoinedGlobal
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  • Promezus
    Promezus1mth
    Replied to mrhateshimself

    May be you are talking about Styx River ?

    "Mnemosyne's Echo," the Vampire Lord chanted, casting the spell to reveal his memories to Bong.
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  • Promezus
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    Replied to Lucius_SS

    XD XD but thanks for review

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  • Promezus
    Promezus4mth
    Replied to Monarch_Lord

    yes.. :) and this is fun, 馃榿馃槍馃槍馃槍馃槍

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  • Promezus
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    Replied to TwiliDarkRituals

    correct.. story must continue. even if they were high level NPC let's say 10000 level still, I will find some way to continue story, if not, tata bye bye story end at chapter 1.

    The main army of the Kingdom arrived, following closely behind. They were the formidable Knights of the Kingdom, led by the SS Rank Knight Captain himself, dispatched to ensure the safety of the princess.
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  • Promezus
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    Replied to finnegun
    [Due to the innate Skill: Gluttony, You can absorb skills from opponents]
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  • Promezus
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    Replied to Promezus

    my point was to add the betrayal, that even you know someone since childhood and grew up together, in face of greed, power anyone can turn against you and can betrayed you... if she could have told her for keeper for money there she would only get the money but here money, fame, power, everything

    Ch 6 Chapter 6 - Blind Fate
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  • Promezus
    Promezus4mth
    Replied to HaracasAye

    ohh understand your point now... XD It's about the way its done..

    Ch 6 Chapter 6 - Blind Fate
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  • Promezus
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    Replied to Promezus

    In perspective to influence family everyone, human, animal, monster whatever for them everyone are some random side character, but you are a reader in your prespective he became the main character.

    Ch 6 Chapter 6 - Blind Fate
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  • Promezus
    Promezus4mth
    Replied to HaracasAye

    I got your point, but he is a MC, every story whether it's novel, manga, manhwa, manhua, movie, web series whatever revole around one character called as Main character.There always a trigger point, a breaking point where one character journey start to explore the world and become powerful. She can get any eye from any random people then that random one become the MC or if not MC, then may be a friend of MC ? sister of MC ? Wife of MC ? mother of MC ? father of MC.if not ? then it would be totally random story of someone without any goal and destination, nothing at all..

    Ch 6 Chapter 6 - Blind Fate
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  • Promezus
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    Replied to HaracasAye

    as you already know, mc was in different realm and time flows differently as well know.. No one knows how much time our mc spent in that realm...

    Ch 10 Chapter 10 - Who I Am?
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    Replied to Promezus

    *become

    Ch 6 Chapter 6 - Blind Fate
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  • Promezus
    Promezus4mth
    Replied to HaracasAye

    Ok so as I already told the selection to tower where you can bece hunter is random and less than 18 age, now Kimiko adopted by influence family but still she did not get the eye.. So ? this was only the way left where she can take the eye of someone else and she knew the perfect candidate for it.

    Ch 6 Chapter 6 - Blind Fate
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  • Promezus
    Promezus4mth
    Replied to Unkindness

    yes :)

    As Bong concentrated on taking the form of a human, he imagined a figure that was both alluring and powerful. He envisioned himself with a toned and muscular physique, his skin radiant under the moonlight. His hair transformed into long, flowing black locks that framed his chiseled face. His fangs remained sharp, giving him a hint of danger, while his eyes sparkled with a mix of mischief and allure.
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    Replied to Ty_gmt90b

    :) thank you so much for you positive feedback :)

    Ch 9 Chapter 9 - Blue Screen
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  • Promezus
    Promezus4mth
    Replied to Aveline2002

    xd xd

    "Finally, I won in the end. This is the end for you. If you have any last wishes, speak now," Bong asked, his voice faltering and out of breath. He had used all his energy to deliver that final blow to the Vampire Lord.
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  • Promezus
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    Replied to Raph_ael

    I want to maintain the authenticity, a touch of human, I know it is not perfect but in reality there is nothing perfect, world is advancing at very fast pace, but still someone should maintain what actual humanity means.. But yeah I am writing my new novel and use some AI tool to Deliver best grammatically content possible and my thoughts

    As he withdrew, his eyes were haunted by what he had done. He had taken a life, even if it was to save his own. The weight of his actions hung heavy on his conscience, but survival had prevailed over morality in that crucial moment.
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  • Promezus
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    Replied to Jeffrey_Veerman_6233

    yes, you are also right, it could decompose but isn't the perspective of common human knowledge of current world? As a writer, I read many comment on this, but what I observe every comment based on the knowledge of the current world i.e. earth. But this world is not derived from the reality of earth but a fantasy. The world where magic exists do you think same law will be apply here as well? What if he was alive ? what if he using his life force to keeping him alive ? what if? What if? and this what if ? I explained as well.

    Four adventurers reached the spot where their fallen comrade lay. One of them knelt down and pressed his hand against the fallen adventurer's wrist, searching for a pulse. He then gently placed his fingers near the adventurer's nose to check for breath, but there was no sign of life. As the realization hit them, tears welled up in their eyes.
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  • Promezus
    Promezus4mth
    Replied to Sloth_like

    Because this is the theme of it *hmm.. #Vampire #Shadow #Blood, I will explore it more in my next novel

    Captain Erebos, the commander of the secretive shadow army, was summoned to Emperor's private chamber.
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  • Promezus
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    Replied to Sloth_like

    No :) but he gave this System to him

    [Haha, maybe I'm rubbing off on you]
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  • Promezus
    Promezus4mth
    Replied to Sloth_like

    Hmmm.. Thank you for this valuable information :)n

    "Master, I bring a letter sent by Your Highness," Amelia announced respectfully as she presented the letter to Victoria's father.
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