Comments of chapter undefined of Travels of the Daughter of God

I’m disappointed cause I personally think this is better then the other fic but if the other fic goes to daily upload I will 100% keep reading that

I'm not a writer, but a read/listener, so all I can say is write what you enjoy, I love this one along with the other one, but if you can't get it to move forward, don't push yourself or it might burn you, if this one is dropped, that's just how things go.

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Aww I liked this story. Oh well I get it I hope to continue reading amazing stories written by you.

I like this story

I liked reading your story I hope you pick it back up after your break from it

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Keep up with the good work.I'm still looking forward to the next one's.I'll be waiting first start up again[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

I would be happy if you would continue this story and if you need a month to do that it's ok, but I Would be sad.

Sad to hear, but at least you let us know, unlike a lot of other writers. Hopefully, you get the spark for this fic back, and I will see you then. 🍻 🍻🍻🍻

kinda disappointed, bit if you can't write this anymore, it's fine, your other fic is just as good for me so you won't see me complaining.

I am a litle disapointed but don't force yourself just don't drop please

No worries 😁 take your time...

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thanks for the update and I hope you are feeling better after your break and you can come back strong and relaxed 😌😎

Sad, but I get it

No worries mate

I'm a bit disappointed, but I understand. In my opinion you went too fast and loose with the plot and powers and maybe should have taken it slow to build up the story a bit more before moving to a new world, or at least have her go to a different world than HP. I think maybe it would have been better if you focused more on the fact she is Lucifer without introducing all those other powers. She's already a celestial being, so there is no need for the rest of the powers, or maybe introduce new powers in increments. I liked the premise, though, so I hope your next fic turns out better. Keep at it!!!! I will give the next one a shot as well 😉.