Comments of chapter undefined of Dragon Tamer (Pokémon SI)
Dragon Tamer (Pokémon SI)
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I'm kinda disappointed in Edgar overall here. He should've calling in for Azurion the moment he realized an executive would likely be there. And he was kinda a poor battler too the only thing I liked that he did was the surf thundershock combo. Even then I still didn't like that he did thundershock instead of thunderbolt. I could go on more but I'll stop here.
I plan to further develop Edgar's character later by giving him a power-up. I wanted to portray him as an excellent trainer but with not enough Pokémon, limiting his choices in critical situations. Additionally, I aim to depict a gap between him and Archer, creating a sort of divide that he must bridge to become stronger and realize what he lacks. I can understand the disappointment, but it was intentional. Azurion had sent him on an investigation, not a battle, so I remain convinced that the way I've written the story is the right path to follow.
