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Comments of chapter undefined of Spider-Man Mayhem

JustDK
JustDKLv10JustDK

Characterization in the beginnings is pretty bad especially in this chapter. With great intellect comes photographic memory as well as old memories, yet Mc continues to act like, I love my parents, I enjoy these new parents, go to work, never see your son, I completely understand.... yet forgets that they will die soon by canon timeline. That's not how someone who supposedly loves their parents should be acting if you know their gonna die... unless you forgot, yet you remember useless school information? Full of holes in this chapter.

Dakshay
DakshayLv4Dakshay

Sigh,author, why are you repeating the history?

Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

TftC. MC should've thought about It sooner as Original Peter's Parents also dies when he was 4 Years Old. Also,If MC couldn't save them then at least he should've asked for Money,I mean Peter grows up in Poverty as Uncle Ben was too Poor and too honest to ever become reach,so MC should've make his parents give Uncle Ben and Aunt May his Life Support Money so that he could grow up Properly,I mean Peter's parents are scientists,so don't have enough money for Peter to grow up in a little bit of luxury and Not poverty?

Readtilltheybleed
ReadtilltheybleedLv10Readtilltheybleed

I know that fanfic authors cling to canon because they aren’t creative enough to reimagine the story should they flap their little 🦋 wings and 🌪️ make any substantial change… but I think they miss the biggest incentive for creating the story in the first place. We read these stories because we like the original works, we see the characters live out a tough life and we want to make it better. We see the villains cause tragedies and we see how inefficiently they receive their karmic comeuppance. We don’t just want to see a remix of the original. This is doubly true when the MC is given vast amounts of power yet they fail to make any meaningful difference because… PLOT. If I was reborn into this situation and I had four coherent years to think about the future… I would not have allowed things to progress in this manner. Honestly, even if I was a fool like the MC and I never made any plans to counter this emergency I know I could have resolved it by breaking the rules and revealing a little of my secrets. Considering his mind is one of the best in Marvel, I think his silence could be interpreted as him giving up on his parents rather than unveiling his mystery.

justjohn
justjohnLv13justjohn

ugh, the abuse from his previous life was practically shoved down my throat, f**king cringe. I can barely digest it. Being smart, yet being unable to save his parents, f**king pathetic. I mean, it's obvious they aren't going to take his words seriously, you're a crying mess, they'd probably, no, Definitely think that he just doesn't want them to leave. Was tears the only solution to save his parent he could think of? besides if he did manage to stop his parents from leaving, what next? hide in the house, under the bed?

Novel_Manga_2624
Novel_Manga_2624Lv3Novel_Manga_2624

I don't understand, will he feel helpless or see the country again? I prefer the latter

DaoistJAjubC
DaoistJAjubCLv1DaoistJAjubC

For the love of God, a year old already speaking? Who Reed Richard next to him who needs Tony Stark, understands something like a little biology is fine, because of the memories and taus

Asurathoth
AsurathothLv1Asurathoth

At one year old he was already reading and understanding biology books. Are you sure this freak is human? Children generally start walking around one year old, a little less than that or perhaps a little more. Creating this protagonist who has severe trauma due to abusive parents doesn't seem like a good idea to me, especially when you put him in the place of Peter Parker, who has good but absent parents, not to mention that he usually loses his parents early in childhood and his uncle as a teenager. I didn't really like it so far.

DaoistJAjubC
DaoistJAjubCLv1DaoistJAjubC

But the body has developed enough to enter the study room alone and developed enough for the vocal chords to work without problems... I would have taken him to church for exorcis

Aye_itz_cloudz
Aye_itz_cloudzLv14Aye_itz_cloudz

Thxs for the chap

AvidReader962
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Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

Sangre60Tenibris
Sangre60TenibrisLv4Sangre60Tenibris

Thanks for the chapter

One_Singularity
One_SingularityLv14One_Singularity

Tftc

RogueCrescent
RogueCrescentLv14RogueCrescent

Thanks for the chapter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.

Novel_Manga_2624
Novel_Manga_2624Lv3Novel_Manga_2624

Bom

MercenaryRollen
MercenaryRollenLv4MercenaryRollen

👍👍👍

Blightingale
BlightingaleLv1Blightingale

Thanks for the chapter !

TyrantTron335
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