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this chapter's got me twitching. I don't know why, but this quote from Harry Potter kinda resonates well with this ark, after a bit of adjustments. Enter, stranger, but take heed Of what awaits the sin of greed, For those who take, but do not earn, Must pay most dearly in their turn, (So if you seek beneath our floors) So if you seek beyond this shore A treasure that was never yours, Thief, you have been warned, beware Of finding more than treasure there.

I'm ok with him smiling in battles and fights. But out classing someone, and smiling while doing so. That's just disgusting. It's true what they say, Give someone power over another, and see how ugly his soul is...

Cringe. His blatant attempt of manipulating public favour and trying to justify his action, claiming its payback like some scorned lover is sickening. Be better.

it's absolutely disgusting reading the protagonist trying to justify his cruelty. He's already admitted to himself He's a monster, the f**k is he doing trying to sugar coat his actions. I don't care what excise he has, to go from such a jovial kind of guy in from of the Rock Guy, to intimidating Grape Head, to bruising a rib, then back to playing a victim. what did he expect others to view him as after such a cruel act, that it was justified? This just goes to show that he's an advocate of Police Brutality. Is he going to ruff up every Villain? not that I agree with their lifestyle, but some villains don't have a choice, or have made mistakes, or were led astrayed. is he going to be one of those edgelords that advocate that killing is ok? I don't mind the slaughter of goblins... and wolves... but will he start butchering wrong doers? like some f**king Wuxia character deciding it's genocide Wednesday?

I'm not a fan of this mc. I'm steadily losing interest in him. His answer to the swordsman's question was a bit too innocent for me. His attitude of servitude to the Mage was embarrassing to read, yet he was so defiant to that elf, like, is it a race thing? His crude remarks of disturbing people in search of the swordsman was nauseating too. and lastly, his sense of defeat after discovering he's surrounded by higher level Monsters. Thinking of remaking a new account after he was so prideful in going against the Elf.

ugh, the abuse from his previous life was practically shoved down my throat, f**king cringe. I can barely digest it. Being smart, yet being unable to save his parents, f**king pathetic. I mean, it's obvious they aren't going to take his words seriously, you're a crying mess, they'd probably, no, Definitely think that he just doesn't want them to leave. Was tears the only solution to save his parent he could think of? besides if he did manage to stop his parents from leaving, what next? hide in the house, under the bed?

I like the magic and the background... a bit unique from other Fanfics I've read so far. The characters, they're alright... but I just don't love them. The writing? I'm fine with it. Though, the development... I don't know. I had high hopes for this, but it just seems to draw a bit too much out of me every chapter... and this latest chapters got me feeling... disgust maybe? contemp? I've lost interest in the MC. and so, I've lost interest with the novel. he's just too... weird for me. One up to the story though is the Ettens! F**king love the progression. Too bad I find this guy too weird to keep reading... the half dwarf a third human and a third House elf too, and that chick with the jewelry.

Ugh, I don't really like the Targaryens. Can we have a dragonborn who hunts dragons in Westeros? And Essos? I've never played Skyrim before so my knowledge on dragonborns only amount to magic and weapons wielding, dragon shouting, dragon slayers...

TF AM I READING!?

I like swords. especially European swords. introducing Knights into the shinobi world sounds cool, too. Kingdoms versus elemental country maybe...?

I didn't like the song selection...

I feel conflicted... I wished he'd incorporated the good parts of both characters, but I'm getting a feeling he leaning more towards his Stark persona. I invisioned something more along the lines of Stark persona out in public as a mad genius playboy, Wayne hidden in the cold alleys of Gotham. But, it's just a Stark in DC.

Too much information... is he planning on going the Tony Stark route where he's just open about being a hero? I much preferred Bruce Wayne's path, hidden in the dark, a myth you'd hear on the streets and and by parents who'd scare their children into compliance.

Ugh, another one of these protagonist who has to be the center of everything. it's these types of protagonist that I love to read about in novels where the Villain counter-attacks and suppress these stupid protagonist who think the world revolves around them.

honestly, the thuck is she wearing?

Saintly Potter, who'll do anything for his family, ignore his own wants to spend time with his daddy, turning the other cheek for his sister to spit on, help his mother in the kitchen and read stories to his baby sister. He's too good. And I don't like it.

Can't believe you vilified my boy King Robert! Yeah, he was massive ****boy, but he had heart!

****ing Targaryens. Honestly hate them alongside those ****ers out west, the Lanisters. Whatever happens in the future that's not to my like, I'll blame it on them ****ing dragons flowing through his veins.