EzioAuditore_1
Bruh I'd fight those haters for you in a heartbeat 😤😤 They really be the same people that read the most horrendous and poorly written stories known to man with no actual readable content besides "uHhh, mE iS SO StRoNg, bEcaUsE iM StRoNg i cAN gEt WoMeN tO MaTe WiTh" 🐒 They have the AUDACITY to criticize anything that isn't readable enough that a five year old can understand because their brain can't handle reading anything past a few sentences, You'd think they'd at least have some coherent thoughts somewhere in their limited brain capacity
Nah , it feels better than the dxd one . Especially with the chapter of endless death , you won me over. I have seen many times where, during transmigration or reincarnation, they meet an outer god or ROB so powerful that they end up disrespecting the cosmic beings of Marvel and dc, which in hindsight is quite hard to comprehend. You're the first one I've seen who's given respect to the power of Dc cosmic beings .
I do enjoy this story so I hope you will continue it. It’s really just the “cerebral” nature of the story that bothers me, pretty much all of the stories conflict so far has been mental, with no real physical conflict or goal in sight. I also hate the conversation he had with death, when he said “I look forward to you guarding my soul”. All I could think when he said that was that as long as he doesn’t pull a Darwin award then there’s no way he’ll ever die, with the essences’ he has he’ll become a being surpassing death for sure so the whole “accepting mortality” thing he was doing in that chapter made no sense to me. Just my opinion but I much prefer a MC who persues immortality than one who does the whole “I’ll live a short but worthwhile life rather than a meaningless immortal one”. Like, just do both??? If you have access to the literally INFINITE multiverse then how is it even possible to get bored or lack meaning? Theres an infinite number of things to do…
Continue it. My main issue rn with it is we are spending like a lot of idle time with the league of shadows. Like, we should start wrapping this lil arc up and move on. You don't have to remove the league from the story or anything, just give the mc the opportunity to get away so that he can interact with other characters as well.