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  • Ziad_2348
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    Personally, I am almost never a fan of making the mc join a peerage. He doesn't need to, and the idea of basically enslavement just puts me off. Would rather have him form a business-like contract with rias/sona and get stronger himself.

    Takumi may or may not join her peerage but he for sure will make it worth his while by milking all the benefits he can. Rias is not prepared for recruiting someone like Takumi who is actually experienced in negotiation and knows his own worth.
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    Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent
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  • Ziad_2348
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    Keep it up

    Ch 54 They Didn't Laugh At Me.
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    Marvel : A Reptilian Adventure
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  • Ziad_2348
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    Continue it. My main issue rn with it is we are spending like a lot of idle time with the league of shadows. Like, we should start wrapping this lil arc up and move on. You don't have to remove the league from the story or anything, just give the mc the opportunity to get away so that he can interact with other characters as well.

    Ch 22 Fanfic Continuation Q&A
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    Gacha Is Bad Civilization! (DC Meta Essence Fic)
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  • Ziad_2348
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    Please tell me Gwen and Peter make up soon. I kinda found the whole burning bridges thing unnecessary. Like you could have just had him say "ya know my uncle got shot and killed, so I am going through hard times, and I just need some time to myself" But anyway, now that you mentioned Peter wanting to make it up for Gwen, and the message thing, I have high hopes for them making up.

    Ch 24 Moving Forward Part 1
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    Marvel: Abysmal Spider-Man
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  • Ziad_2348
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    maybe like a one piece character with good haki next?

    Ch 15 Revelations and Assimilations
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    Gacha Is Bad Civilization! (DC Meta Essence Fic)
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