EzioAuditore_1
Maaaan you really shoe horned the MC to join the league huh? All that power and he didn't even use them, this feels really forced my g, but I'll continue reading to see if this storyline goes anywhere or if this leads to something more in the future, I just hope there's a learning experience for the MC in this cuz honestly??? The whole using his powers for the cops and then not using it against ras was out of character, like he's okay with killing 2 cops with his powers but all of a sudden he doesn't use it??? Why???? Cause they're named characters??? If all of this was just to get him some martial arts training then that's pretty hollow.
tfc. its good, there some errors like how his sensing powers that op cant sense ras and talia but interactions of mc and others are good. in the reviews i read that there are eldrich or powerfull people start to meddle with mc, i hope you will not make it messy author cause this slow pacing of story is good. meddling of powerful beings only will make story messy. dc have too many story and plots you can integrate mc. mc is really chill and i like it a lot and i hope story also be chill after this point like it was to this point. sorry for my rumbling, up until now ypur writing is very smoot only with minor errors and reading is enjoyable. good job