You should have Ned send the Tyrells back without making any deal with them. Now they remember about having better relations with the North.

The future self is now like an ROB constantly messing with the MC and those types of stories always become very bad.

Since this was a worldwide attack by the Injustice League can the MC apprehend them and take them to be judged by the countries allied to him.

The Boys one because there are so few stories from that fandom. It would be better i think if he doesn't join Butcher but is actually a Vought employee.

The king kills their mother and they turn the other cheek. Dorne really is useless. No one could have done anything if they closed their borders and declared independence.

I hope a lot of people die to the Lizard. Maybe that will give him a kick to take things seriously.

Shouldn't the Brazilian soldiers have interfered with Manhunter just barging in and taking Adam away? The Brazilians had the right to detain him after all.

That was the best opportunity to end Black Adam. Now a dangerous enemy that will target the MC is alive.

Good job on killing Wotan. Hope he takes advantage and kills Black Adam too instead of letting him go or something.

I hope Bane and Sportsmaster don't get away in this version. Its always annoying when the villains with no powers escape.

The other two stories just like this one with Sentry and Sunspot reached the Santa Prisca invasion and stopped. Lets see if this one can break that curse.

You should write either an Invincible or The Boys story. Theres a surprising lack of stories from those two works. Though if you do write an Invincible story please don't make the MC Marks brother or sonething because the few Invincible fics that exist have all done it for some reason.

I don't understand why he is so obsessed with Arya? She is the type to speak out of turn in a meeting and insult some foreign lord or noblewomen without even thinking about it.

The MC really seems like a idiot asking Supergirl why she jumped into the fight. So she was just suppose to keep watching her last family member die.

If dragons can use haki, use devil fruits and can speak why would they let themselves become slaves of the Targaryens?

To be honest the part about the arakh being Blackfyre just seems stupid. Like anyone would destroy a sword of that renown.

It would be interesting if this Athena is from the PJO world.

Maybe he can bring Lynese Hightower into his service to get an in with the Hightowers and trading rights in Oldtown.

Stats shouldn't be a whole chapter.

Now he has to go the long way and across the entire continent if he wants to go to Essos and also deal with hatred of all the people of the place he will live in now. Catelyn also got what she wanted it seems.