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Comments of chapter undefined of Azeroth's Last Hope

Sage_Honos
Sage_HonosLv14Sage_Honos

please return

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George_Iacob
George_IacobLv4George_Iacob

make him have mages trained and more powerful then they can confront deadwing with weapons enthanted and from very strong materials.

Slipier
SlipierAuthorSlipier

If you liked how I wrote the story and want another fanfic about Azeroth, you could join in to help me write a story together. I could make a discord and we can discuss about how the story will go, discussions about lore, system, power scaling, development and etc. On the other hand, I’ll just work on it by myself and somehow figure something out after months or years haha. I don’t mind it though, it’s a fun hobby. more productive, than playing games for hours senselessly. at least I can create something and show it to the world.

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ComradeSujihiko
ComradeSujihikoLv4ComradeSujihiko

Sadge, hopefully you can recover. Definitely a good fic and its potential is gud. Order 227 has been lifted, you can retreat now and rest.

VonBritannia
VonBritanniaLv14VonBritannia

bro you have magic also many heros in wow are human. One of wow main bosses was a turned human. the human argument doesnt fold. also outside of the big baddies who are confroted by heros their vast armies would be counteracted by yours. also another way you can do it is introduce stuff like altiliery or change the wow war system from knights to full scale legions that work as units the like roman empire and the revoluitionary calvery tactics of the inital islamic empire that allowed both empires to dominate their time periods against numbers much larger than then bc of tactics and miltary style.

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George_Iacob
George_IacobLv4George_Iacob

I suggest to use that an alchimist created a magic potion for eternal youth based on a magic spell that stop aging

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Daoist96s1k6
Daoist96s1k6Lv2Daoist96s1k6

Thanks and I hope you get over the block, I like your idea of the discord. For the story, however, to defeat Deathwing, adventurers who are of mortal races do it, while for the numbers of people, deaths etc... it's a lot more complicated and you have to think about it carefully. If you want to continue writing and improving I recommend you continue writing and trying new stories from other worlds too, you can start with simpler worlds and in the meantime you could start thinking about a more important and longer story, it's just an idea.

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John_Glanville
John_GlanvilleLv14John_Glanville

you could use the altar of storms to evolve humans into high humans depending on which story you read they live between five to ten thousand years so martial arts magic more they learn the more they evolve it's been a good story and I hope to hear from you soon good luck with your writing

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CrimsonKrow
CrimsonKrowLv5CrimsonKrow

Here is an idea my brain came up with that might help with whatever your next project or this one is up to you at the end of the day. "Write around 10-20 chapters before publishing any content.". It may require a brief delay before uploading any content. But, as a result, it means having a backlog of stockpiled chapters to release. Choose a specific day of the week to upload a chapter regularly, such as Monday. Take some time on Sundays to review feedback on your writing and story. This will help you identify ways to improve your work. Use the remaining time to write and implement feedback when applicable. I hope this can help in some way. Writing down any ideas, Even if you don't use them, writing prompts may help with writer's block. While it's not a guarantee, it's worth a try.

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ButDidEyeDie
ButDidEyeDieLv4ButDidEyeDie

I really hoped to see what changes will happen if the MC didn't become the "dutiful" son... xD but, stuff happens that we can't control. I do hope this would be continued in the future.

Bierbart
BierbartLv14Bierbart

dude the only human argument doesnt make sense....its warcraft and there are strong humans too.... thats like someone in a cultivation novel complaining he cant get steong because he is humans....and azeroth is a fantasy world... magic... other energy... plants, artifacts mutagens maybe... a lot to gain a power up.... and azeroths lore runs deep so well...add to it he has a system which should already be BS OP if its a systen which is worth someting...worst case some BS level up which breaks the world rules... thats kinda a premise of the system to blur the lines of set rules of a world