nice chapter

bro theres a reason why this is number 1 on popular rankings rn. the main issue with twillight fanfics is that they always do crossovers or make an oc the female lead or make the story super depressing and crindge. this ends up runing the story easily. you good sir do not have this issue. keep it up.

this version is actually active unlike marvel wolverine who just waits till sometjing bad to happen before he even acts.

i really like this version of wolverine. wolverine in comics is one of my fav characters but hes always either too pesimetic whenever hes not hoping from one love intrest to simp over to another. Hes always late to every event or a bystander in marvel and when he does act its usually lackluster other than a couple of instances like when he faces off against hulk for example.

no. marvels already massive. everytime someone tries this story just turns to shit.

bro the sun idea someone stated is really dope and a nice way to advance his godhood.

or you can make it the mcs next goal to rewrite his fathers wrongs basically. cause i dont know if ya know this but odin has another daughter named Angela who trapped in heven because of odin mistakes. you can have him and hela go on a journey to try and bring her back as well and hela can bond with her eldest sister who also got screwed over by odin. and both would be grateful to the mc.

cause you can make it where both loki and hela dont mind him as king as long as it wasnt thor for loki or odin for hela. if he isnt king then you can have her travel with him.

i mean hela is a blank slate. the only reason why she is how she is cause she was trained like that and had no one to love her family wise. you can have the mc stubble on her somehow and slowly talk with her over a time period and be a big brother to her even if hes younger. it also depends on if ya want to make yo mc king of asgard or not after odin.

helas a blank state. she hasent experienced any emotions outside of war so you can mold her to what you want. also she would be perfect for the mc should he become king as she can be his greatest warrior and soldier.

what ya gonna do about hela?

hell yeah

finish up the great crusade then go into the horus hersey. cause warhammer as made this a cannon event that would have happened no matter what the emperor did. part of the deal he made in the beggining. the people are interchangable through.

nah.

nah bro the template is fine. as long as not yorochi im fine. every template naruto fic uses that and it makes no sense at all since its way to weak

no its fine. just ignore the haters bro. alot of users of this app is mostly in india or america both places that have very high bullying or hate/critique cultures. so its normal if you get a ton of hate its mostly loser.

gc

gc

the goat dc story in terms of potential is back

bruh this is so good