Comments of chapter undefined of In Marvel with Greatest System

Use Grammarly, it's free anyway.

your storys good but you need to fix the grammar and spelling, it makes the story harder to read so people will just drop it

começando agora e já adorando

even thought the edited chapters are still very rough, readable but rough. you might need to slow down and read out the story to yourself.

thanks for the chapter author san

i AM LOVING THIS....SO FAR SO GOOD...i REMEMBER THIS NOVEL WITH THE STRONGEST SYSTEM...THE MC AND THE SYSTEM ARE BOTH CRACKHEADS

It was Tony who gave her the nickname "Pepper". Her brother shouldn't call her this way or know this... He should call her Virginia, or some short version of this.

Thx for the chapter

Thank for good chapter.

Start was good! Lemme read da rest of it.

Obviously it's not the greatest system but a trash system since it needs him to be the one initiating it, honestly just reformat it xD

Thanks

Thanks for the chapter !

Thanks for the Chapter!

another useless author. just first chapter makes you doubt thinking capabilities of such individual. so for 4 years mc did nothing and stayed in his bed? cause if he had a system, any time he fall as a child there had to be a system message about damage, and thats without taking into consideration his accomplishments and skills. and i dont even want to mention about mc being useless and not trying everything as soon as he understood that he was issekayed. only a moron of an author will think that a proper human being could be that dumb