just one thing, Toronto is in Ontario....
Ontario's the province, Toronto's the city.
be like one moment he's in Montreal, and the next he's in Toronto, that makes a little bit more sense
i really liked these 2 chapters tho might just be cuz of music am listening as I read a comment mentioning its dramatic ,will review after reading few more
I can deal with the rest. Cheater? Fine, dum? Fine? Simp retard? Nope. MC currently extremely pathetic. Just first impressions hope it improves bit but
being a simp major nope.