Thanks story, but heres where Im out. So much added characters not from genshin getting stale. Added arc which honestly being bland so far and now reincarnators? If you enjoy it keep going, take care.

First impression is decent story minus the bad grammar at times, its enjoyable. Downside to some and me is adding in characters from other anime near the start. Its not that its horrible idea just the way it was done is frankly bad. Really random kids somehow all female, all anime characters? Honestly, to me made no sense might as well say theyre AUs with certain changes as well. Of course might change my mind later if implemented well in story later but still could have being done different way but as is was cringe moment.

Anyone can confirm if it gets bad from here? Novel was going so well now this stupid conditions ruin it. Unless author develops it way it works not a beta mc getting ntred? If not ya save me my time by dropping it.

Still see no point in this OC Anna. Hardly contributed anything nor feel like it matters. I might be proven wrong depending how it develops but for now its meh

Agree with you. As much I critizise stories I appreciate yours. Sure started out so so though has improve though no story is perfect. Keep doing youre best. I critic cause i like it though in the end all that matters is your opinion. keep it up.

While it has improve, why did it take this long to start getting stronger? Lets be honest its stupid. Only reason I can think off is to follow closely to canon plot. Youre telling me all this time was wasted just basically doing nothing till now. No excuse you know theirs multiple ways one can train, grow stronger from so many stories not just dxd, plus didn't he said would do anything to get back with Elysir? 100% full idiotic.

Bit improvement though get rid of the yandere oc mom or whatever character improvement youll do. Over clingy characters usually always a turn off if not done right.

What was the point? Seems like a waste of time. Enemys escape, pointless OC(mom, anna), enemies know about them, got killed by trash. This was just stupid.

I can deal with the rest. Cheater? Fine, dum? Fine? Simp retard? Nope. MC currently extremely pathetic. Just first impressions hope it improves bit but being a simp major nope.

To follow "cought"cannon"cought" right lol.

The premise sounds good in writing but fails greatly as you continue to read on. Lets be real the MC is retarted, dumb decisions, beta, author trying stick with cannon, gets cocky once later on finaly gets sacred gears only be massively nerf to follow plot, example gets Valis sacred gear only to lose to him later cause vali develops sacred canceller in this fic lol. Gives advice or supppsovely might change cannon only for author somehow reroutes it back to cannon somehow lmao. Sure some monor changes bit not worth bothering. Did I mention Mc is moron, youll rage reading this I promise 😂.

Doesn't change fact mcs weak nerfed to ridiculous levels. Everything has a retarted excuse why he can't do this or that. Even when he gets sacraed gear like valis he just gets steamroll by him after vali gets sacred canceler. its obvious authors just making excuses trying follow cannon to a T. Anyone reading this skip this fanfic. Theirs better ones out their.

Really? He just did that after some flowery language earlier chapters. Anyone reading at this point if I were you probably drop after couple of more chapters to see if it improves.because so far this mc has been one of the worst and dumbest ive ever read. Supposively knows cannon yet his retarted.

Let me guess, besides such a pathetic attitude as a mc, never ever though grab common sacred gears, author probably going try follow cannon somehow. This is a prime example of it. Seriously all this time and useless physical training but never though gettiing easier gears before this maybw help of his fathers family. Will it get better? Im hoping gets better but so far leaning dropping it.

Does it get better? Im seeing a common routine of outragous training, gravity increase blah blah . Though when it counts it means garbage just nerfed every time. like come on he should be way stronger than cannon but nope always same. will this be constant so i can drop it?

Gave it the benefit of doubt. unfortunately ended up dissapointed. As others mention MC is plainly unlikable. I mean some character development maybe? Nope, I mean its doable in some gray dark MCs but this one just doesn't cut it. Reminds me of a more edgy cringe sasuke with mix of psycho. You can give a try but youve being warned.

Not great at all. Plus the way its produce is cruel. Look up how its produce, ya Ill pass on it.

Tell me about. At this point reading up current chapters hoping author makes right or at least improve MC peanut brain. Who Im I kidding probably going more training arcs for other instead Idk focus on actually getting stronger.

This confirms it, MC has the brain of a peanut. so mich inconsistecys but if course plot will make it right evenif it makes no sense.

Power scaling makes no sense at times. One moment up agains a big bad next moment struggling against fodder? Same with the tournament and what haplen with his sign in systems seems extremely useless lately. Will good boy keep training othets or be useless?