Comments of chapter undefined of Gamer System in Uchiha World

I expected the MC's Sharingan to have awakened but not even that, the whole story seems more like an introduction to Naruto than to the MC himself, it seems that the MC will be useless for most of the story, if with all that emotion the MC doesn't awaken the Sharingan then it seems that he will never awaken, it is almost impossible for him to have something more impactful than the feeling of what it is like to die and to die in such a superfluous and humiliating way, all because he is not important to anyone, if that were not enough to awaken the Sharingan, nothing else will be. That alone is enough to turn me away from this story, a mistake like that left any subsequent awakening meaningless, and it could only come from the author who writes a story about technology in the world of Harry Potter, which for me is an aberration, almost in the same level of firearms in GOT, of course it's a matter of personal taste so I didn't write a negative review, especially after reading only four chapters. The writing itself is good and if Naruto were the protagonist or his brother, the beginning of this serious story would be almost perfect.

Author sound like the type of person who like the sound of their own voice and just wont shut up. This whole chapter was wriiten in the most pretensious way possible.

We only see the mc on ch 4

Wow namikazes story is more sad than the mc

Honestly spend too many words explaining unnecessary things, that I can literally skip the whole chapter and the story wouldn't advance anything, you have this same problem with your hp fic

The scene of mc went to water fountain with low hp as his first mission kinda reminds me about some Chinese novel that also did the same thing ; mc dying and went to water fountain for recover his hp (I forgot the novel's)

Outra desgraça de mc escravo do sistema. Escravoceta. Gado.

thanks for the chapter

Tftc

Thanks for the chapter