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Comments of chapter undefined of ReLife In Fake Twilight

DuchessKolslaw
DuchessKolslawLv2DuchessKolslaw

Hannah bloodline lost me. There's really no need to have it.

Indratempest
IndratempestLv1Indratempest

Pide el linaje de dioses para luego pedir esa mierda de linaje hanma comparado al de los demonio y dios de Nanatsu

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LeonidasCSNeto
LeonidasCSNetoLv1LeonidasCSNeto

Friend, I've been on this platform for a long time, and I can say with certainty, you're ready to ditch the fanfictions and launch your original, a collection of horror short stories. Right now it's 01:58 A.M in Brazil, and I don't know if I'll be able to sleep, I'm looking everywhere now and I swear the noise of my air conditioning spoke my name. I understand that you wanted to bring a little color to the character's introduction, but there was no need to add trauma to my life, I just researched what a skinwalker is and it easily entered my top 3 fears. Great writing!

Zenvo
ZenvoLv2Zenvo

The beginning was really scary.

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Teraten
TeratenLv12Teraten

1st in this new fic haha haha [img=recommend]

Pengamat_Ketiga
Pengamat_KetigaLv2Pengamat_Ketiga

The 3rd request doesn't feel right, I mean if he wants to be immortal, why not have the 3rd magic from the "fate" series, so that way he won't be alone in his immortality, especially since "nanatsu" immortality can't be controlled, so that's possible. so the curse of boredom in the long term

HOLLOW_SHAGGY
HOLLOW_SHAGGYLv4HOLLOW_SHAGGY

Aye_itz_cloudz
Aye_itz_cloudzLv14Aye_itz_cloudz

Thxs for the chap

Jean_R_6763
Jean_R_6763Lv2Jean_R_6763

The Hanma bloodline could be exchanged for unlimited potential in both body and soul. and the techniques matched by enormous talent in all areas.

Jean_R_6763
Jean_R_6763Lv2Jean_R_6763

it was kind of dumb to choose Ban's immortality instead of specifying in a way that the soul and body are completely immortal.

Shaggy_Boombastic
Shaggy_BoombasticLv1Shaggy_Boombastic

Way to many wishes but i am still gonna give it a try

FiLL88
FiLL88Lv1FiLL88

Judging by the fact that everyone praises him, everyone understands everything? Shozanah? How did this come about? sits playing -> got a gun somewhere -> evil spirits came from somewhere -> corpse... O_o. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

creekinny
creekinnyLv2creekinny

Eu realmente acho que teria sido melhor ficar apenas com os poderes de Tristan e qualquer coisa de seu mundo, isso já seria muito forte sem precisar adicionar mais com aquele físico Hanna e etc afinal ele já seria muito forte fisicamente sem isso E eu me pergunto por que ele vai reencarnar justamente nessa época ? Ele é imortal e poderia sei lá mudar a história desse mundo criando clãs com suas raças a muito tempo, na verdade isso seria aconselhado eu só li o primeiro capítulo até agora mas esse é um universo alternativo então pode ter outras raças sobrenaturais fortes que podem ser ameaças a ele. Reencarnar tão tarde no mundo apenas para acompanhar a trama principal limitou seu potencial e o que ele poderia alcançar em tão pouco tempo, até por que ele teria pais ao seu lado o tempo todo, como ele vai treinar com esses dois e sua irmã por perto ?

Xedornox
XedornoxLv1Xedornox

SpeedyG
SpeedyGLv10SpeedyG

Interesting start... thanks!

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter. I thank you for the chapter.

yagami_void
yagami_voidLv4yagami_void

thanks for the chapter