David_555
I don’t like the nerfing of his ability. You said he lost all of his abilities when he was pushed into the portal by Michael? You’d think he’d adapt to that. And he never adapted to the soul damage? Again, you’d think he’d adapt and become immune to the damage over those billions of years. Feels like forced plot to justify your new character template (stripping him of all the powers he’d previously acquired, giving him different abilities, only leaving him with immortality, losing his wheel).
honestly, im not enjoying the whole "edgy boi" MC who is just attacking everyone at random. To start a novel with an MC that people grow to like and then just remove that and put some BS Wuxia novel angst protagonist whose all demonic just doesn't fill me with hope for the novel going forward. if he's going to stay like this going forward then I would put a warning in the novel description telling people that's the theme as a good chunk of readers avoid that sort of thing.