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The writing itself is much better, I read it with Google Translate but the writing seems very coherent to me, however... the MC has become pathetic, the only type of protagonist I hate more than Chinese is a kind and correct Japanese , I'm sorry if this hurts your feelings but it's my opinion, besides, I think that trying to put logic in these introductory chapters just made the atmosphere strange, before I read these chapters laughing at the illogicality of the situation, now I just feel ashamed strange and I wanted to stop reading, but I liked the other chapters, sometimes trying to add too much logic ruins the reading experience.
To be honest Kushina and Minato being together was planned by the 3rd hokage. Since he wanted someone to take his hokage position. And what better person to take the mantle and keep the village weapon( Kushina) under lock and key than the student of his student jiraiya that harbor that stupid will of fire.