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ShiroNirvana1dCommentedCh 432 Notice :- ShiroNirvana1dReplied to ShiroNirvanaCh 129 Difficult choice
- ShiroNirvana1dCommented
This fanfic is good so far, to pass the time, but I must say that this delay in the chapters is very annoying, especially this clueless fight, which took almost 1 entire chapter, just because the mc was talking to the villain and mocking him, I think it's completely unnecessary.
Ch 129 Difficult choice - ShiroNirvana3dCommented
Sometimes I don't understand these people, it's just a Sharingan, I know it's a "repetitive" reward, but come on bro?, nowadays everything has become a cliche, so just enjoy the story. As long as the MC knows how to use the reward well and doesn't get nerfed, it's fine with me
¶{Ding! Congratulations host, you got the Eye Sharingan with no side effects. Even if the host does not have an Uchiha bloodline, your Sharingan automatically matches your bloodline}. - ShiroNirvana4dCommentedCh 140 Chp-140: Akatsuki's Corporate Culture
- ShiroNirvana5dCommentedCh 125 Chp-125: The Sceptre of God
- ShiroNirvana5dCommentedCh 125 Chp-125: The Sceptre of God
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- ShiroNirvana9dCommentedCh 5 Genius
- ShiroNirvana3mthReplied to itsDhi
Alright, good luck with your book.
"Dumbass," Kasper spat, his voice laced with a chilling disdain. "You saw me move like a blur, crush your men like insects, and you thought a rusty pistol could stop me? Fun fact," he continued, his voice dropping to a conversational tone that sent shivers down the Captain's spine, "that little pebble wouldn't even leave a scratch." - ShiroNirvana3mthReplied to ShiroNirvana
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"Dumbass," Kasper spat, his voice laced with a chilling disdain. "You saw me move like a blur, crush your men like insects, and you thought a rusty pistol could stop me? Fun fact," he continued, his voice dropping to a conversational tone that sent shivers down the Captain's spine, "that little pebble wouldn't even leave a scratch." - ShiroNirvana3mthCommented
I've read so many fanfics, that apparently I'm starting to lose patience with certain things, like for example all this unnecessary talk, just killing everyone there without 2 seconds would be wonderful, so that all this talk is meaningless.
"Dumbass," Kasper spat, his voice laced with a chilling disdain. "You saw me move like a blur, crush your men like insects, and you thought a rusty pistol could stop me? Fun fact," he continued, his voice dropping to a conversational tone that sent shivers down the Captain's spine, "that little pebble wouldn't even leave a scratch." - ShiroNirvana4mthCommented'It seems like the plot will follow this time,' Kaylon thought. He could see the fate of the two families, and indeed, they will fall in the battle against the black dragon. Hmm, that means the plot will be similar to the original storyline, which is good, a bit boring but at least it will be stable. (Don't worry, with the MC's intervention, the plot will change; I'm not one of those authors who are afraid to change the plot).
- ShiroNirvana4mthCommentedCh 4 4.Full of Anger
- ShiroNirvana4mthCommented
Honestly, after chapters 50, this fanfic got really bad, it wasn't very good before, now it's just history repeating itself and the mc making no changes, it's extremely boring and should have been finished much sooner and quickly, the only The reason I still read is because I hope that the next dimension will be more fun.
Ch 80 Chapter 80 Kale - ShiroNirvana4mthCommentedCh 30 Chapter 30 Vs Buu