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Comments of chapter undefined of I Am Uchiha With A Son System

DarknessKnight
DarknessKnightLv13DarknessKnight

harem is not bad as long as you cnow how to write them if its author who just wants readers and money then you get cach them all type which honestly is stupid then thre are People who just want to keap going like taking entire village(all female village) in harem then there are People who simply dont have patience to write and treat harem like add on to ff then again there are People who use premise of harem then end up pairing mc with only one girl or make MC sufer from harem members(potential) making it comedi there are those who just brute force it and those who make mc suffer from tragic past or some mental illnes that makes him loak pitiful and then there are authors who make mc desne as a brick of course they will leave bad impresion on harem tag because to make a good harem stori you nead right story setings good, character grouth, oportunities, patience, while not making harem main point but at the same time not add on to story but to integrate it in story smothly most people decide to concentrate on one girl until she is captured then focus on another while not making it official then introduce jeaolusy and atention competition to space things up and potencijaly ruening the rest of the story some authors even make mc ignore some girl just to make drama later so jea its hard to find someone who can make good story let alone one with a harem mix in it

Firelord
FirelordLv14Firelord

wait what ,he went from one of the leaders of konoha and teacher to a student??

Josue_SD
Josue_SDLv3Josue_SD

De ser maestro paso a ser estudiante?, creo que le das demasiado poder, influencia e importancia a Tobirama. Recuerda que aunque Hashirama era bueno no es ingenuo, es un ninja que nacio y creció en la guerra, dudo que Tobirama se moviera a sus espaldas, de ser asi nunca se habrían repartido los bijuus a las otras aldeas.

King_Kay
King_KayLv4King_Kay

It’s a great story but it’s taking to long like the synopsis already told us a good amount so ik we all jus waiting for him to leave a quick fast forward would be great

Yap28
Yap28Lv14Yap28

if you dont want a harem, 4 is still too much, almost all harem story got more repetitive because of it, and got boring real quick

peter_thomsen
peter_thomsenLv1peter_thomsen

1-2 years madara will ssnap

Demon_Lord_Panda
Demon_Lord_PandaLv15Demon_Lord_Panda

romil
romilLv5romil

Thanks for the chapter

Eid_zack
Eid_zackLv4Eid_zack

ehhh, I thought he is in twenties

Estelem_Shelym
Estelem_ShelymLv11Estelem_Shelym

Harém de 4? É muito.... Seria melhor 2 no máximo 🤦🏻

Maradilue
MaradilueLv13Maradilue

👍

Mercurio
MercurioLv2Mercurio

It doesn't make sense for MC to call tobirama by the suffix sama since they are both equal in politics and power, nor for him to be sent to college and expelled from the leadership of the village for so many reasons that I'm too lazy to write, tobirama and the Senju have more power than they should they themselves are not following what they preach

Len_Stoff
Len_StoffLv1Len_Stoff

Only losers and cuckolds write a harem, by the way it is impossible to make offspring of Uchiha and Hyuga in this case one child will only have a sharingan and the other will have a byakugan

Travis_Btmb
Travis_BtmbLv13Travis_Btmb

Thanks for the chapter

AlexPendragon
AlexPendragonLv1AlexPendragon

thanks for the chapter... good day to all who read

Dante00
Dante00Lv1Dante00

Muy corto

BAM_AMVS
BAM_AMVSLv4BAM_AMVS

Ths for the chap

ShifuLong
ShifuLongLv3ShifuLong

Tftc

SirJuan_Juan
SirJuan_JuanLv14SirJuan_Juan

Good Chapter 👍