luminous1_vanqu10
Join my server if you need help and feedback. I’m dropping it here. The story was good but you are rushing too much, not even realizing what you are writing.
luminous1_vanqu10:dude you posted 30 comments.are you like reviewer in webnovel.
Pass on this. You use a lot of fancy words that have no impact on the story. Original Thor dealt with Surtur before his own power up. You already said your Thor is EXPONENTIALLY more powerful, yet it takes this long. Also, the fight scene was rather boring, if you go boring do it because your MC was so strong it ended quickly, not because its the same words repeated.