Comments of chapter undefined of Thor God Of Thunder

You need to put quotation when there talking so we know I was confused for a sec

Thanos faces Surtr ?

Pass on this. You use a lot of fancy words that have no impact on the story. Original Thor dealt with Surtur before his own power up. You already said your Thor is EXPONENTIALLY more powerful, yet it takes this long. Also, the fight scene was rather boring, if you go boring do it because your MC was so strong it ended quickly, not because its the same words repeated.

bro you didn't add any details too the fight you just kept saying the same thing Over and over again celestial might realms shaking 😒 😑 really

well, thanks for the chapter, and I thought it was good.

I have written 5 chapters and will upload Monday onwards.

hey guys any recommendations for how the plot goes.I will upload the next chapter in the working days.the time line is- Thor 1 so.... nowany comments on how I should proceed.

its good you added more fantasy to the fight... but at the same time, this thor that trained his lightning powers seems just like normal thor, the training chapters seems useless since you use Surtur as the opponent who would be defeated anyway

when is this in the mcu timeline

Short af chapters

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Join my server if you need help and feedback. I’m dropping it here. The story was good but you are rushing too much, not even realizing what you are writing.