Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece:The Lust System

the author makes mistake after mistake. First, we have a squad officer who behaves like an Otaku now wants to go home? Well, if he wants to go back the way he came, he has to put a bullet in his head, LoL.

Never understood the whole wanting to go home mentally. Our world is utter garbage. It also just feels like a straight up insult to everyone who doesn't get a second chance at a life let alone in an anime world.

Why tf is there is a lot of ff with mc goal is to go back home???? Like it’s makes no sense

1) you made the MC too old for starting out 2) making it a specific system sucks.

So much cliche in one chapter 😭

He should master Rokushiki

Thanks for the chapter

Good chapter

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.

It' s really good target

good

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Thanks good chapter

the mistakes are tolerable. whats intolerable is the concept or the idea of the story. based on the title and this chapter alone, its surely gonna be all about segs. based on how it was written so far, the characters are probably gonna be dull and bland whose only meant to show up for the segs and such. i was kinda hoping for a really good one piece FF. oh well, you cant really blame children from writing their fantasies. let children be children.

Thx for the chapter

Thanks for the update