Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel:Grinding to Omnipotence

I like it, you outdone yourself

“More mature” then you go ahead and write a character like this

He feels so unreal, but he fits in the Marvel universe it just that it icks me cause he is supposed to be in a world quite like ours.

Excellent start!!!

Não é meu tipo, boa leitura pra quem fica.

Never read your previous "rendition" so I have absolutely no bias. Good start, I like it!

Quero mais

Good start

I like it, I read your original one, great improvement...